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PreZidict 5 71.43%
O.V.Dose 2 28.57%
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Old 05-01-05, 07:11 PM   #16
Ka.Ze
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Voted For: O.V.Dose

Prez idolizes cassidy but i wont let you bite his lines so stop askin me
I'll formally murder you...the best you could put together was a casualtee
Jesus christ! he uses so many quotes its almost as if someone else had written it
His verse will 'tank' so hard......people will start to put their fish in it

vs.

nothin worth quoting

O.V.= good verse. had some nicew wordplay and
and creative punches. the nes i wouted above were ur best. but tyh toohpasetline and the closer i wasnt feelin it. but overall it was a solid drop

Prez- most of ur verse was filled filler.
and u had some bad attempts at wordplay.
and whn u did have punches they were weak.
and get rid og the bolding and other stuff.
if people dont get ur wordplay then they suck.
anyway elevate man.

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Old 05-01-05, 07:30 PM   #17
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aha.......................u a real funny dude forreal......................next time dont vote in none of my battles..................
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Old 05-03-05, 05:47 PM   #18
O.V.Dose
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can we get some more votes on this?
 
Old 05-13-05, 08:09 PM   #19
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Voted For: PreZidict

O.V.-aiight you had a good verse.........flow was good...........you verse needs some structure work tho.......you need to up your vocab some.......your punches were good and thought out...some needed a lil work.....

PreZ-aiight you had harder punches cuz they were put together better.....but your flow wasnt as good........again you also had some structure peoblems.......good use of wordplay.........you had weak vocab.......

opener-PreZ
closer-PreZ
flow-O.V.
multis-tie
punches-PreZ
personals-O.V.
wordplay-PreZ
vocab-O.V.

overall Prez just pulled this vote from me.........
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Old 05-16-05, 11:46 PM   #20
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Voted For: PreZidict

O.V.:
lost the structure, so as the flow, good punchlines, couldn't see if there was a punchline.... good anyways

Prez:
good structure n flow, the wordplay n multi's made this vote...... anyway... improve vocab

pc RTF
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Old 05-17-05, 12:40 AM   #21
O.V.Dose
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so uhhhh....................................what??
 
Old 05-17-05, 11:58 AM   #22
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Voted For: PreZidict

Prez idolizes cassidy but i wont let you bite his lines so stop askin me
I'll formally murder you...the best you could put together was a casualtee
I Heard Dat Last Line Somewhere Else...But Nice...6/10
You surpassin me? Nah maybe once you lose your baby teeth
Look at this kid...hes all juiced up like an elderly lady's sheets
Nice Line...Not Dat Strong...4.5/10
Jesus christ! he uses so many quotes its almost as if someone else had written it
His verse will 'tank' so hard......people will start to put their fish in it
Aha...Straight 2nd Line...5/10
Listen kid, i see the bitch in you....dont be afraid to show your true face
This kids so stupid he tried to glue on a pair of fake boobs with a tube of toothpaste
Nah Not Feelin Dis Shit....4/10
Your crew breaks up when this fights on, people will say "Lyrikal's (sigh) gone"
Didnt mean to ruin it, i just came to Boogey Man....and thats why Prez sleeps with his lights on
Tight Line But Damn @ Ya Structure...Ya Structure Is Ridiculous...Those Last Few Lines Were Stretched O.D.

luckily dose got a 2nd chance at death call his sequel da Final Destination
ya heart is racin?..allow PreZ to ike ya flow like an abusive menstruation!*
Real Tight Opener.....7/10
O.V.Dose was conceived on RV...so i guess he was made for this site
ur profession is 2 give head..news flash! its not ur text dez dudes like!**
Aha!....Real Nice....Good Personal....7.5/10
knew u was a fem, there was no oil spill but underneath u leaked red***
i been told ur lifes not needed fucked up even ya soul wants u dead!
Damn Fucked Up...Anotha Nice Personal...7.5/10
He a male prositute, tell em how u took over body sales 4 ya mother
U a twin? my rap gave u nervous reactions now u shake thru ya brother
Aha Dis Line Was Personal Also...Good Humor...7/10
dez rhymes u wastin, couldnt take-out addiction if u & a fiend were datin
neva forced a line but if dis was unwanted sex...my bars just raped him!
Tight Ass Finish...8/10

The Personals Were Serious...They Both Played On Dat Category The Most Also Punches....But When It Came Down To Enjoyment....I Gave It To Prezidict....Serious Battle Good Shit Both Niggas

RTF....
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Old 05-17-05, 10:15 PM   #23
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Voted For: PreZidict

Good battle. Vote goes 2 Prezidict for a very nice opener and it filled out thru the rest of it.
dez rhymes u wastin, couldnt take-out addiction if u & a fiend were datin
neva forced a line but if dis was unwanted sex...my bars just raped him!

Good battle both of yall. Vote is PreZidict
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