Voted For: Golden shellz

aightm, good stuff from both

Golden:
nice verse, man....
hard hittin punchlines, the closer had me like ';'oooh''
i've never seen people use ''the system'' before
an the lfunk flex shit was good too
nice wordplay an creativity, ya killed it with your verse, real good stuff

Wicked:
aight verse too, had me like ''oooh'' with your openeer, but ya verse lacked consistancy throughout...i wasnt feelin the line: about ''teeth hurt''...asn a few lines was stretched too, try n get too the point quicker

no hate wicked...vote goes ta Shellz

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186647
^^^
heres the link

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Voted For: Wicked One

Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines...
I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime...
Eh....
I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis...
Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus...
Alright....
You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons...
but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in...
Nice....
Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt...
or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first...
Ill....
Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies...
I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye...
Sick closer...

U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten
ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing
No..................
my army's full of generals even the wicked one know
that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show
No..................no....................no...... ...............no..............played.........as.. ..............fuck...........
fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's
after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie
No............
To see the look on ya face it makes me sad
Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads
No............
I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims
why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM
Eh....played but ok...

Wicked, hands down...more originality and better punches, Shellz was played as fuck...

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uppin uppin dis battle c'mon i need two more votes and den we done

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Voted For: Wicked One

U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten
ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing
6...nice opener!!
my army's full of generals even the wicked one know
that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show
5...nah!!! nice try but i aint feelin this!!
fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's
after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie
3...wack!!! porno movie lines are fuckin shit!!!
To see the look on ya face it makes me sad
Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads
5...looks funny, but when ya read it it aint!!
I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims
why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM
7...OOOOHHHHH!!!! dope closer!!!

OVERALL: 26/50


Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines...
I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime...
5...GAY!!! another wack opener!!
I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis...
Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus...
5...not feelin it!!!
You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons...
but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in...
5...just a lot of shit talkin really!!
Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt...
or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first...
6...better but ya still lackin!!
Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies...
I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye...
6...an aight closer!!

OVERALL: 27/50

a pretty weak battle.......golden shellz had too many really wack lines and some played shit....the only plus was the closer, that shit was dope as hell!!! wicked one was consistent throughout, his punches were all average which just edges him ahead.

V/ - Wicked One

RTF!!!! links in my siggy!!!! if ya haven't yet!!!(If not my vote will be removed!!)

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ayyo uppin this battle for 2 more votes iight yall

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Voted For: Wicked One

this was an ok battle, nothin too hot but pretty good. im gonna have say Wicked one def took this one, even though his verse wasn' tall that hot. but he had better punches, even tho most of his verse was multies.

Golden shellz= ya verse was kinda weak dog,i've seen much better from you. you had some ok punches and no real multies in there. no personals, structure and flow was decent but overall nothin really hot in there.
*golden shellz* best bar=
U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten
ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing
^^ good bar here, nice creativity n good delivery, but i've used this before

wicked one= not a very hot verse from you either, but u had some good flow and nice multies, but u aint really have too many punches in ya verse. some were ok but nothin real creative in there. coulda came alot harder than that
*wicked one's best bar*=
You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons...
but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before
you step in...
^^decent punch, but nice multies in here n good flow

overall= both of yall came kinda lazy in this battle but im gonna go wit wicked one cuz he had better flow and better multies in this battle.

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OM's

3 goddamn pages and this battle still not closed damn yall spazzed out

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Voted For: Golden shellz

GS- your flow struggles.... very few multis tho structure is aiiite... a few punches worth noticin... the funkmaster flex thing I liked even tho it was hype... first bar was aiiiite... system thing I saw a punch almost just like it in your other battle so no...find new material, ya feel? your... wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads was a weak relation at best...

WO- your flow pisses all over shelz... but you throw absolutely no punches... just random rambling with cool structure and decent multiing...but not battle material, imo...


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