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Voted For: LFS The Great

Ending this crew battle, LL aint winnin against EF,
LFS is taking over, I could beat ya crew by myself,
^ight..but a lil bit played...
Comin out swingin harder than the last time you dissed me,
Only way you can talk crap is if I shit in ya Rice Krispies,
^ok......basic...but ok...
Before this battle shoulda stopped at Ca$per to raise up to me,
I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity
^ok.......
How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy,
I rearranged the language by makin LFS the Great a G
^good...
LL ran from the Finest like bitches but TG got his merrymen,
Ya crew is full of spinoffs, yall some wanna be Emericans,
^ight ight..lol..good..
Bitch you're skills is fake like hoodrats rockin Mi-No-Nos,
But I got good news, I saved some money by switching to GEICO
^umm first line good...second..no..
Cuz this battle is done, but I'll end on a positive note,
Kids don't be like Ma$taminad and go and get ya feelings hurt,
^bad closer...

overall:6.5/10
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Ay yo LFS THE GREAT came back 4 anotha murkin
Punches hit hard dey leavin dis nigga internally hurtin
^no..
Look lyrically i'll burn you so you betta start usin drop drills
cuz police trainings the only way you'll eva gonna cop skills
^ight good.
see you gotta crawl b4 you walk you startin off tryna clash titans
battle me again when ya elevation's higher then gas prices
^ok...
cuz i bet you swear you can rip me but by ya verse it aint dun yet
you really thought you was ready when you not like young sex
^???...no..
you should've took that as an advantage w/all dat time to spit kid
if you gargled diarehea you still could've spit shit
^no..
LFS THE GREAT 'sposed to burst - You bleach money?? Cuz you got 'light cash
You bite ass - losing a race is how you "might last(get it??)
^yeah ummm no
You write trash. How you gon hurt me - you ain't lern how to diss.
But bitch I'll "do you so dirty" it'll "burn when I piss"
resurrected from the grave, ill reintroduce you to the cemetary
cuz ill fuck up this bitch like a texan vetinary
^WTF...no..
slice ya spleen, rip out ya bowel and stuff it down ya throat
cuz it's the only way your shit could make any emcee around ya choke
^???
he's a joke, but the punchline's as funny as brain cancer(cancer's not funny...get it)
your disses couldnt turn heads if you doubled up as a breakdancer
^ight....
Lyrically blessed and known for rippin deese lames
22 lines 2 murk u again now give up the rap game(i already battled him and murked him 5-0)
6ummm bad closer...

^elevate..

overall:5.5/10

^^^^yea w/e

good battle huh LFS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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gotta agree...better than last time lol....at least i got votes lol

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Voted For: LFS The Great

ight htis was a damn good battle fams but i gotta vote

so my vote goes to LFS

explanation:

Lfs verse had some pretty creative personals and some good wordplay

LFS:
Punches- Creative and some what humerous, Yet hard hittin n very creative when worded
Personals- Creative n hard hittin

example personal:
I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity,**
How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy,
(ight that was good wordplay and a nice personal)

Flow- was nice and steady which made it easy to read and stay in toon wit
strucutre- nice strucutre, even bars most the way , easy to read
Multies- descent use of multies, jus elevate on them a lil bit


Lyrical:
Punches- You came with the same set up as u did n other battles, most is smash mouth but pretty basic fam, get a lil more creative wit them

Personals- descent use of personlas but not as creative

example personal
Ay yo LFS THE GREAT came back 4 anotha murkin
Punches hit hard dey leavin dis nigga internally hurtin
(ight yes u did beat him, but this is now, wasnt feelin it fam)

flow- good flow easy to keep with
multies- good use of multies, they matched wit ya flow
structure- good structure as well, lil stretched, but nice
wordplay- came a lil basic, in this one not as creatvie vocab

this battle was hard to vote on, but im jus helpin people get they battles voted on

phewwww real good battle hated top vote but had to

vote goes to LFS, liked his creative vocab and stronger personals

both elevate on some keiner punches, get a lil more creative


good battle fams

be sure to RTF
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holla


Vote requested to be removed by Armada Da 187

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

methaphors-lyrical
opener- lyrical
ender-lfs
humor-lyrical
context-lfs
flow transition-lfs
punchline-lfs
flow- lyrcal
overall=lyrical got this by an inch...close battle really tough to judge butlyrical u got this and my vote goes to you

return the favor man http://community.rapverse.com/showb...lest+freestyler

damn this is a CLOSE battle...hopefullyI can tie it up at 4 lol...uppin for votes...damn Lyrical I didnt even expect it to be this close

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yo man u got any other battle u want me to vote for you? cuz i am bored

ill vote honestly like how i did on this battle

Voted For: LFS The Great

V/LFS The Great....this was an even battle but Lfs came wit his punchs that were creative an structure on point...he had good personals an werdplay.....Lyrical....u had a adecent verse but alot of stretched lines an played punchs...not many personals...No Hate...RETURN THE FAOVR (OR U"LL NEVER RECIVE ANOTHER HONEST VOTE FROM ME)
Opener=Lfs
Closer=lfs
Structure=Lfs
Punchs=Lfs
Personals=lfs
Werdplay=Tie
Multi's=Tie
Vocab=Lfs
Overall=Lfs The Great

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