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AckRite | 5 | 55.56% | |
Armada Da 187 | 4 | 44.44% | |
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05-05-05, 06:09 PM | #16 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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Lol Son We Online...Don't Tell Me To Calm Down...I Been Calm I'm Just Sayin Dat Vote Wasnt Explained...I Don't Giva Fuck If Yall Friends Or Not...It Wasnt Explained, It Dont Count...Undastand?
Thank You@Hustla...When You Get Time Vote On Dis Foreal Foreal
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05-05-05, 10:45 PM | #17 |
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IP: 91F7 E22B
Voted For: AckRite
Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187 RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7 6...aight decent punch, aight personal!! Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin' Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987 3...nah!! date punches are gay and this was weak!! Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen! 2...WTF!!! 2nd line was pointless!! Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer' 7...best punch so far!!! dope!! Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero' If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero 6...decent shit, nice metas!! Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee' Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs' 5...ok meta but 2nd line is played!! OVERALL: 29/60 (48%) You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand 4...weak opener, pretty much filler!! Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid 5...better but still weak man!! Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback 7...LMFAO!!! this line made me laugh!! lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit 5...playin off his name but didn't pull it off gud!! Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks [B3...BOOO!!! homo lines are played to fuck!![/B] cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me 3...borderin on self-g, not gud!! I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite 4...not feelin the closer!! OVERALL: 31/70 (44%) aight this battle was weak, armada i seen ya come a lot harder in this battle ya just was droppin played concepts, some filler and a border line self-glorifyin line, ya had one dope punch but it wasn't enough to clinch it. ackrite was pretty weak mainly with a couple of decent punches but he had less played concepts so he takes this battle in my view!!! V/ - AckRite |
05-06-05, 10:57 AM | #18 | |
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IP: D3A2 4B25
Voted For: Armada Da 187
hey now this battle was ok but 187 got this for better punches he had a good concept and had my head bobbing the whole time cause it was easy to fallow vote 187 |
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05-07-05, 05:42 PM | #19 | |
I'm a closet fag.
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This was feedback posted for AckRite
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You're not very good at math..
Febuary 9, 1987 Febuary 9, 2005 ....hmmm....2005-1987 = 18.. Fuckin' dumbass..
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05-07-05, 05:59 PM | #20 | ||
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^I Fucked Up DickHead..................Fall Da Fuck Back...........
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05-07-05, 07:04 PM | #21 | |
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IP: 1F84 1588
uppppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnn this to the top!!!!!!!!!!
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05-08-05, 01:25 PM | #22 | |
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
Voted For: AckRite
-This is an LFS review- ~Armada Da 187~ You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand Nice opener...set the mood right lol Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid Didn't really rhyme but was hard and flowed nice Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback Funny as shit...nice lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit Sounds lie filler to me...meh lol Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks Nice use of what I'm assuming is a personal lol cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me Been used before but yu worded it differently..nice I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite Decent closer ~Ackrite~ Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187 RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7 Nice opener Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin' Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987 Sick personal...liked it Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen! Another nice bar.... Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer' Didn't flow too good but nice none the less.... Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero' If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero Didn't really get it lol..I'm slow sometimes lol Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee' Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs' I swear I heard this before somewhere...pretty good Overall: This was VERY close but I gotta give it to Ackrite....he had more personal, but Armada had more punches...I take personals over punches in a battle...had these been two OM's I woulda gave it to Armada...damn I hate these kinda battles...they are SO hard to vote for....anyway rtf on any and everything in my sig por favor (please lol)...The Cupcake Man has left the building....
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05-08-05, 01:27 PM | #23 |
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IP: 2B27 EDA0
Voted For: Armada Da 187
that was tight metahpors-armada opener-armada ender-ackrite context-armada flow-armada flow transition-armada vocab- ackrite my vote goes to armada because he came stronger with the puches and with the strucutre.....both verses are good and both of you really good at rappin but armada took this one |
05-08-05, 08:44 PM | #24 | |
Killin' G'z
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IP: 12DF 16D6
Voted For: Armada Da 187
Armada Da 187 - Good spit. you had good punches, and it flowed well. Best Line - You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand Worst Line - I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite AckRite - iight spit, had some good personals, some stupid punches tho, but good flow. Best Line - Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee' Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs' Worst Line - Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin' Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987 OVERALL - Arm takes this battle, he had the better flow and punches were hitten harder. Ack, work on your punches and you will get better. Vote - Armada
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05-08-05, 09:38 PM | #25 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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Lol Yall Killin Me........I Dont Undastand Man..........But Uppin Dis Shit Again
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05-08-05, 10:39 PM | #26 |
Light Weight
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This was feedback posted for AckRite
IP: 20B2 DF4A
checkin polls.......
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05-09-05, 02:16 PM | #27 | |
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IP: 522A 016B
Voted For: Armada Da 187
votin for Armada Armada had better punches better structure his personlas were a bit stand offish but his punches made up for them Ack ya verse wasnt hard hittin u used the birthday thing which is a bitch played ya punches were ok, but real basic n not hard at all Punches- Armada Personals- Neither Multies- Armada Flow- Tie Structure- Armada wordplay- Armada v/Armada better serries of punches i like this line the best: Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid (lol nice) and this one: Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback (LMFAO) good battle vote Armada |
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05-09-05, 04:07 PM | #28 |
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Voted For: AckRite
This was a pretty cool battle but ima have to give this to ackrite , to me he just came harder , better punchlines , and harder personals Armada You spittin ya lyrics like a lil boy, go upgrade to man you aint even worthy of my punches, only my backhand Pretty cool, opener could have been better Let my lyrics destroy ya career dont fight, convert n stay Let me fists pop ya face cuz its the only way u gettin laid LOL , nice Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback not feelin it lil youngstah in this game, Ill teach you a thing or to bout dis You just confused n denial, you cant ackrite, you piece of shit Nah Step to me Ill bust ya face,wack disgrace, step the fuck back If you where "In My Area" we leave queers dead on the tracks Nope.. not feeling it cuz I dont like lil fairies tryin to break bad, thas you to a T if u had my name, had my style you still could never be me first bar was wack, second was good I got hollowtips, n Fo Fo's and no patience, ur in my site messin wit me, ima tell u dis, u gonna sleep forever ackrite it could have been better if you said , I got hollowtips , n fo fo's and im not patent , ur on my site? Messing with me , Ima tell you dis , Yu dont wanna go to sleep so act right(Actrite) Overall could have been better, if you worded your verse differently and had harder punchlines , and more direct personals Actrite Fuckin Cunt!, A Prostitues Pussy Gets More Respect Than 187 RapVerse Must Be His 'Permanate Pillow', He Hea From 1 To 7 Decent opener , could have been better Whole Lifes A Dilemma...Armada's Heart Is 'Ba-Con' Like 'Kevin' Merk Him So Hard It'll Be Like He Wasnt Born February 9, 1987 Nah Armada You Fuckin Illiterate Or Whut...I'm Da Air You Breathe Wait..Born In 1987? Why Ya Age Say 18..You Really Seventeen! Think you did your math wrong Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer' HAHA , DOPENESS Could End His Life In A 'Flash', But I'm Not Ya Daily 'SuperHero' If I Cross Dressed His Record Dis Drag Queen'll Still Be On Zero Nice Sit Back & Watch My Techniques..I'm More Than A Simple 'Textcee' Readin Ya Lines Is Like 'Jugglin Da Alphabet'..All I Do Is 'Catch Zs' ROFL, DOPE CLOSER Actrite got this whill those two hot bars, if armada came harder he would have had the battle , just ackrite had harder punchlines and nice personals vote-ackrite
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05-09-05, 04:43 PM | #29 | |
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Voted For: AckRite
Personals: AckRite, his personals were all over the place.... Punches: AckRite, and this is really the most important category.... his were just stronger, more complex, and hit much harder....... Multis: neither really Metas: AckRite Entertainment: Eh.. i felt like urs was written for audio armada... thats how i write too... i could hear it bein rapped but not enough to me to win this text battle....... Structure: Armada V/AckRite Overall good battle, but i pretty much explained all of my reasoning above.......
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05-09-05, 04:56 PM | #30 | |
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
Voted For: AckRite
jea jea i peeped this before. shit was hot ackrite.: Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer' Enough Personals, Lemme Punch Fast & Murder This Rap Poser Anticipated My 'Virgin Open'..Now You'll Witness A 'Tight Closer' Hot shit famz. this shit was straight fire. i just broke it down to the hottest lines in my opinion. that shit was fire. I was feelin it mos def. you had good wordplay and your shit was worded correctly. your flow was right on target and you murdered him with punches overall 7.5/10 armada Like a dick to pussy, im in n out, but you wouldnt no that the last pussy u ever touch,coughed a hairball on ya throback thats the only nice line in there. shit was aiight wasnt too witty but it was a good punch. u worded shit horrible. ur flow and structure was decent though overall 6/10 vote: ackrite
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