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View Poll Results: The rematch
Ackrite 5 55.56%
Armada Da 187 4 44.44%
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Old 05-12-05, 06:40 PM   #16
Armada Da 187
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quit freepostin like u said before, let the shyt drop, cuz all u doin is runnin ya mouth, see heres the thing, dis is the net im not gonna go crazy over votes over the net lol cuz shyt like dis is neva fair. err time i get a vote u complain thas "Newbish" you lil cock suckin faggot

u jus dirt to me, u aint shyt, dis is internet battles lol u think its life, lol well maybe it is ur life but not mine

so im jus laughin at u
 
Old 05-12-05, 07:24 PM   #17
MiSk
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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Vote: Armanda Da 187

Armanda- your hits were harder, flow was good, setup was nice, your opener could of used a little work. Closer was decent...need a hard hit at beginning and ending. Need more personals.

Ack- Good opener...I wasnt feeling the closer, some of your bars sounded a little forced, hits were decent but lacked the "Ohhh" factor

Battle was close but gave it to Armada cause the hits were harder

*no hate just honest opinion*
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Old 05-12-05, 07:54 PM   #18
Chris Stylez
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Voted For: Armada Da 187

Armada= Armarda dis was a close battle i think. You had alotta nice punches and some really good structure. And i can just hered da flow in my head as if u was here spittin it.

Ackrite= You did good as well u had a altta punches that just fell short and i really on ly enjoyed to of them

Winner= Armada
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Old 05-12-05, 08:44 PM   #19
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Voted For: AckRite

-This is an LFS Review-

Let's begin this rematch between two of my fams...AckRite and Armada...should be good....

Armada Da 187

After I completely destroy you, you'll accuse me of theft
u used all the info in my profile already, you got nuttin left

Nice...a personal AND opener lol

You suckin cock 24/7 guess thas why you so damn cocky
You ljotfranticly, written on ya pad,thinkin of punches quickly

Typo fucked that up...

Ack thinks he's pimp, But im on ya game, I know all boutchu
You run round wit 10 year old girls, they dont even want you

Pretty Good...

pfft aint shit boy, when it comes to rappin, talent passes ya ya rhymes are old and wasteful, like ya moms when i fuck her

One long bar...noob mistake...though it was decent

Prewritten ya lyrcis n a hurry, cuz u cant drop on a dime
Since you think u better then me, ill crush u, n waiste my time

Basic....

My Lyrics give ya headaches, put u n depressionm ya dooch
I bes take it easy on you, or ill get charged wit child abuse

Nice punch...

You strait crazy, a test tube baby, got no game, illeterate
Ill drag you down and snuff u out, like a marlboro cigarette

Ok gettin serious lol

My lyrics will convert you, yano from from a liar to sincere
ya got only one earing.. on the right, so that makes u queer

Had me laughin on this one...

Ya Lyrics are like prostitutes, cheap, shitty, n neva clean
jus another Virgin Pussy in Rv, So Ill fuck u up, n make u bleed

Nice close...

Nice verse from Armada...came hard and suceeded...lets check AckRite....LET'S GO!

AckRite

Your Shit Is Forced....Fuck with Ack And Wind Up In Grave Yards
I Take Charge, Wack Aint Ya style...Its More Like Your Trade-Mark!

NICE open...

Light Up Your Verse Again..Thats Tha Gay Part...Fag, IM Righteous
You BEating Me Will Neva Happen Like Malcolm X Adoptin White Kids!

Not the best rhymer but clever...

Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

HAHA!

Your Flow Couldnt Be Any Worse....You Didnt Know I Was This Hood
Fuck Shootin Armada........I'll Hang Him By His "Neck Of tha Woods"!

Nice personal

Just Face Tha Facts...I've Beaten You Before.....Stop Testin Me Queer
Dis Kids So 'Washed Up' Bitches Could Do Laundry Wit His Net Career

STOP WITH THE GOOD META'S lol

Test Me Here?............I Dont Have To Prove To A Clown That He Lost
You Could Perform In Front of A Mute Crowd....And Still get Boo'd Off!

Damn you are almost good as me lol

Fact Is Established....Need 20 Lines To Get Ya Point Across Faggot?
Wit 14, I'll Swiftly Give You A 'L In Da Bag' Like TRAVELIN ADDICTS!

nice...

I Mean Fa'Real...Who's Ever Seen A Faggot Spit Wit A Straight Face?
Wack Is An Under Statement....Your 'More Than Weak'...Like 8 Days!

Clever close

Overall: STOP BATTLING YOU TWO! I hate votin between yall...we all need to collab lol...anyway I give the vote to Ack...his met'as are banas...Armada had harder punches but Ack had me laughin to whiole time...which is why I battle and a preference of mine...this was an INSANE battle and you two need to get together on an OM wit me lol....no need to rtf cuz u probably already did but check anyway lol
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Old 05-12-05, 10:06 PM   #20
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Voted For: AckRite

Checkin The pollss/..

Nice drop Ackrite .......

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Old 05-12-05, 10:07 PM   #21
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Oh Damn My fault That Is Spose to be feedback Ill get it changed
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Old 05-12-05, 10:57 PM   #22
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Armada Da 187
dis is the net im not gonna go crazy over votes over the net lol cuz shyt like dis is neva fair.
so im jus laughin at u


its dat why ur voting for yourself?
you see,IM just laughting at you now armada,now i know why i lost against you
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Old 05-13-05, 12:48 AM   #23
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This was feedback posted for AckRite

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not even close...
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Old 05-13-05, 12:52 AM   #24
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Quote:
Originally Posted by MiSk
Voted For: Armada Da 187

Vote: Armanda Da 187

Armanda- your hits were harder, flow was good, setup was nice, your opener could of used a little work. Closer was decent...need a hard hit at beginning and ending. Need more personals.

Ack- Good opener...I wasnt feeling the closer, some of your bars sounded a little forced, hits were decent but lacked the "Ohhh" factor

Battle was close but gave it to Armada cause the hits were harder

*no hate just honest opinion*

no hate and it ain't swaying cuz kats can't see this til after they vote...but dude had shyt that didn't even rhyme... you's a bullshyt voter and you suckin armada real hard...let's be real about the shyt...you's a fraud and armada's verse was garbage
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Old 05-13-05, 01:35 AM   #25
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viewin poll i heard u was a cheater armada i hope that aint true cause u gone if it is................
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Old 05-13-05, 09:26 PM   #26
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Voted For: AckRite

Slashin Armada With Tha Pen I Write Wit...Paybacks This Herbs Plan
Dude Offers Hand Jobs For Votes..Ask 187, He knows It FIRST HAND!

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NOTHING

AckRite took this one...practically 1-sided but Ack had
harder punches...a decent structure & decent vocab

Arm..work on ur punches, & fix ur structure too...
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Old 05-14-05, 09:12 AM   #27
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This was feedback posted for AckRite

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Old 05-14-05, 12:20 PM   #28
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Voted For: AckRite

nice verse homie,wordplay nice punches very creative! vocab nice, structure readable...ya opener was comedy son,u came off wild, i like dat.and ya closer was slick,couldve been better.

Armada ya rhyme scheme was lightweight off at times and it lost me.U were strechin ya bars alot. Lil bit of elevvation wouldnt hurt it,and bring out them punches.nice job tho.
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Old 05-15-05, 01:54 PM   #29
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Old 05-15-05, 07:01 PM   #30
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This was feedback posted for Armada Da 187

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both verses were very good, it was imposible for me to vote but i can say:

ackrite:
Good structure
lost a lil flow
good punchlines
one personal
good vocab

Armada:
good structure
good flow
good punchlines
good on that personal
good vocab

It was hard for me to vote so this is feedback for both
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