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View Poll Results: Kein Witz Vs Mr. Hahn
Kein Witz 5 100.00%
Mr. Hahn 0 0%
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Old 05-11-05, 07:07 PM   #1
Mr. Hahn
New to RV
 
From: East Coast
Mr. Hahn vs Kein Witz

IP: D8BF 0E1D

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Topic: The Creation of The Universe


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-14-05 at 07:07 PM

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Old 05-11-05, 07:07 PM   #2
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Mr. Hahn has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 07:07 PM.
 
Old 05-11-05, 08:07 PM   #3
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Kein Witz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 08:07 PM.
 
Old 05-11-05, 08:08 PM   #4
Crazy Hades
Just searching.
 
IP: 0825 899A

][ Gah. This'll be a weird one...don't like the topic much, but okay. ][
 
Old 05-12-05, 04:44 PM   #5
Mr. Hahn
New to RV
 
From: East Coast
IP: D8BF 0E1D

A chalk outline surrounding infinite time and space,
A vast state of grace with fragments of dust and nothingness

lingering into illustration and vanity
forever stuck in this obscurity someone had to stop the insanity

First there was a chilling freefall of mass minerals
staggering situations rated sprawling passed sinical

adverse fate struck the radiance as it burst with rage and suited protest
space divided creation and beyond age was purpose

new world zephyrs frozen in distance let forth new world ambitions
outgrowth swayed at the fingertips of existence & followed unfurled traditions

next came two lights prevailing life upon the cosmos
one light ruling the day and another taking control of nights polyphonic prose

In my own illustration with the remnants of delay
I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise

In my own illustration with the remnants of delay
I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise
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Old 05-12-05, 04:45 PM   #6
Mr. Hahn
New to RV
 
From: East Coast
IP: D8BF 0E1D

A chalk outline surrounding infinite time and space,
A vast state of grace with fragments of dust and nothingness

lingering into illustration and vanity
forever stuck in this obscurity someone had to stop the insanity

First there was a chilling freefall of mass minerals
staggering situations rated sprawling passed sinical

adverse fate struck the radiance as it burst with rage and suited protest
space divided creation and beyond age was purpose

new world zephyrs frozen in distance let forth new world ambitions
outgrowth swayed at the fingertips of existence & followed unfurled traditions

next came two lights prevailing life upon the cosmos
one light ruling the day and another taking control of nights polyphonic prose

In my own illustration with the remnants of delay
I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise

In my own illustration with the remnants of delay
I twisted the breathing into existence with mind of melodic praise
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Old 05-12-05, 04:49 PM   #7
Mr. Hahn
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From: East Coast
IP: D8BF 0E1D

Okay so i write sloppy, the last post wasnt suppose to be there lol and the last bar wasnt suppose to be there either >.<

Oh well... theres my drop
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Old 05-12-05, 05:11 PM   #8
Crazy Hades
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The air smelled of incense, rosemary, expectations immense;
melodrama choked the air, almost scary, building suspense.
Hands like clever mice, working the tools with feverish fingers,
arms drenched in congealed grease, a sawdust smell lingers.
His arms were frail, breathing shallow, watching his creation.
countenance pale, wisps of gray hair trembling in expectation.
A twisted figure lay infront of him, limbs in irregular positions.
Its hair was crudely trimmed, arms risen in simple submission.
His fists balled, perspiration a pool in which he was immersed,
another creation flawed, just another product of the universe.
 
Old 05-12-05, 08:24 PM   #9
Crazy Hades
Just searching.
 
IP: 28AD 5545

Uppin' this piece...let's get some votes here, guys.
 
Old 05-12-05, 09:15 PM   #10
Mr. Hahn
New to RV
 
From: East Coast
IP: D8BF 0E1D

yeahh uppin for the night...
i messed up my verse double posted and what not...
that last bar aint spose to be there either
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Old 05-12-05, 09:18 PM   #11
p4ntzistheish
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From: Exit 7A
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IP: 606D F99A

checkin the polls...lets go Hahn-izzle lol...yu got thisone lol
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Old 05-17-05, 06:05 PM   #12
josh654789
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Voted For: Kein Witz

yours gets the win....seemed better to me personally.
 
Old 05-17-05, 09:22 PM   #13
Germ
in your system
 
From: Adanac
This was feedback posted for Mr. Hahn

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polls.............................................
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Old 05-18-05, 05:38 PM   #14
Mr. Hahn
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From: East Coast
IP: D8BF 0E1D

What the hell kind of bs vote is that?
Break it down or it isnt counting
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Old 05-24-05, 03:58 PM   #15
Crazy Hades
Just searching.
 
IP: D7AC CF0D

Uppin'...please explain votes. You can get that disqualified if you want, Hahn.
 
 


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