Voted For: MaRVJay1009

well this battle was sorta weak, I guess I'd have ta say MarvJay took this one cauz his flow was betta, personals came a lil harder, Marv we had our battle, you seem like you went down hill, don't drop elevate...

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^^he's scared.lol

Rtf, you bitch about people not returning the favour, and you don't even do it yourself.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This was a pretty good battle but ima have to give this one to MarvJay

MarvJay
onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.
Lol...nice opener..good personal
ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.
Nice..play off his name , decent punchline
i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.
Lol...nice playoff his crew name..good closer

Onestepbeyond
Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*
Decent opener, first line was hot, then it fell off
You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,
Decent, could have been worded alot better
Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**
Dont rhyme very good , but it was decent

Overall Vote:Marv
to me he came alittle harder, onstep did that mama joke which are played and were not in kindergarden no more..
overall keep it up both , nice drop

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MarvJay1009 - this is probally the worst freestyle I have seen you wrote but this was still better than OneStepBeyond.. you had better punchlines and way better structure. and you flow was killin him. 7/10

OneStepBeyond - your flow was pathetic you did not even ryhme..you structure was bad and your freestyle was bad too. keep working hard tho.. 5/10

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Can we say dickride.... why yes... yes we can.....

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

your gettin a win for this, but i didnt really like either verse too much.....you had a nice finisher though.

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^^he's scared.lol

Pizzy Izzy Polls Yo!..............................

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word OSB took this..and Marv I hope yur not gettin at OG cuz then we gon have problems...uppin and checkin at the same damn time lol

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checkin the pollz ..........................................

yo onestepbeyond yr da worst fam lmmmmmmmmaaaaaoooooo

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol