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Old 05-21-05, 02:41 PM   #1
YounGhetto
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Thumbs up Essence Freestyle Pt 2.

IP: F449 F2C0

*Beat Drops*
Yeah
YounGhetto
..Yall Niggaz Kno
Dem Dudes Hold Guns In 2-0-1
Niggaz Is sleepin on me mayne
So I gotta wake Em up on this one rite here
Yah-Mean?
Check It
JerZey

My pivot secure, these niggas is braods, we clippin up jaws
leave em laid out on the sidewalk, kissin the floor
listen up dawg, I'm claimin the spot
I done been humble...now its time for G to spray up these blocks
get some attention, catch a lil buzz wit da slugs homie
no drugs, no cuffs, just da snub on me
you ain't tough, you ain't a thug, you just a duck muhfucka
dat pop shit then duck muhfuckas (whoa)
catch you on the block I'ma clap ya face
so heres ya chance to find God and rap wit Mase
nigga me backin down? yeah that'll be the day
you see Jadakiss comin on the block wit braids (Damn)
Don't think it can't happen nigga, cause it can
anything is possible scince Scrappy joined da Klan
and the breakin of Da Band, you see me takin up the stand
a nigga situation is the makin of the man
this is real talk, alotta niggas on some bullshit
these industry niggas ain't in the street they on some bullshit
automatic mossberg, niggas can't handle em
pop him on the ground, then fuckin Timberland trample em
I switch da style nigga, but I'm still da great
niggas who want beef is makin real mistakes
I don't care who you are, if you real or fake
I'm da illest nigga spittin, it ain't a real debate
muhfucka

[Instrumental Interlude]
Chea...Its YounGhetto man, I'm makin myself known
niggas ain't up this yet
Lemme finish

*Beat Drops Again*
I spit it cause I live it nigga, I'm from da hood but you don't get it nigga
I'm from da block where they grindin just to get dem figures
dem beams is beamin, the fiends is leanin
and every nigga dat packin da heat, beleive they sceamin
fake niggas try to walk how I walk, I'm on the block like a sidewalk
and niggas do a whole lotta side talk
they pussy niggas that'll look at you funny
but you better watch ya back, cause they crooked for money
and these bitches all act the same
they golddiggers, you fuck dem, they take ya money then start actin strange
they like alotta rappers
and cops harrass niggas alot now-a-days so I don't like alotta crackers
I don't trust nobody, I stay lookin over my shoulders
niggas is grimey to, one shot holed ya its over
so its best to take it dead wit da beef
before the lead get to heat, and you layin there dead in the street
Nigga

*Beat Rides Out*


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Old 05-23-05, 05:45 AM   #2
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Yo! dats cool,definately a good read.
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Old 05-24-05, 04:41 PM   #3
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that was tuff styll, I liked Im not no excerpt at critism but I'd give it an A

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