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05-24-05, 04:32 PM | #1 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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SomethinG QuiCk
IP: ED88 2C9A
Who are we? All of us, corrupting shit, breeching trust/
look at it, I had enough, cop's killing kids, out of luck/ It's something quick, It's nothing shit, like Ricky Slick(Slick Rick), In 80s flicks/ It maybe quick, but' its crazy sick, like crazy chicks, in a mercerdez pitt (cockpit)/ My lyrics are complicated, like mute kids with braces, so I illustrate it, with fluid patients/ I'm one of a kind, gun toking a nine, 1 hour before time, 10s your hour of shine/ I'm talking about death, you don't shine in respect, you wine out of breath, with 8 lines scarred in your chest/ I'm the sergeant, bitch, not a virus glitch, like a wired snitch, on a high sound pitch (the cops listening)/ That was quick and bold, with 8 stories told, they ain't story jokes, 1 line left to say, that's all folks/ FeeD BaCk!
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05-24-05, 04:50 PM | #2 | |||||
Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: ED88 2C9A
come On I need feedback for this
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05-24-05, 06:18 PM | #3 | |||
Get Stomped.
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IP: 2D1D 693F
ight this was a good drop good vocab good concept and overall a good drop fix yo structure only thing i aint liking word return tha favour on one of my linkz
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05-24-05, 07:04 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
I need a link! ..or this will be closed
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