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Old 05-24-05, 04:32 PM   #1
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SomethinG QuiCk

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Who are we? All of us, corrupting shit, breeching trust/
look at it, I had enough, cop's killing kids, out of luck/
It's something quick, It's nothing shit, like Ricky Slick(Slick Rick), In 80s flicks/
It maybe quick, but' its crazy sick, like crazy chicks, in a mercerdez pitt (cockpit)/
My lyrics are complicated, like mute kids with braces, so I illustrate it, with fluid patients/
I'm one of a kind, gun toking a nine, 1 hour before time, 10s your hour of shine/
I'm talking about death, you don't shine in respect, you wine out of breath, with 8 lines scarred in your chest/
I'm the sergeant, bitch, not a virus glitch, like a wired snitch, on a high sound pitch (the cops listening)/
That was quick and bold, with 8 stories told, they ain't story jokes, 1 line left to say, that's all folks/

FeeD BaCk!
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Old 05-24-05, 04:50 PM   #2
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Old 05-24-05, 06:18 PM   #3
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ight this was a good drop good vocab good concept and overall a good drop fix yo structure only thing i aint liking word return tha favour on one of my linkz
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Old 05-24-05, 07:04 PM   #4
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I need a link! ..or this will be closed
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