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05-24-05, 01:05 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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05-24-05, 10:59 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
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05-25-05, 01:42 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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05-26-05, 10:53 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
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05-28-05, 09:53 AM
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IP: D8BF 0E1D
soooooooo many users that cant vote... what a waste lmfao BUMP
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05-28-05, 01:24 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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05-30-05, 12:23 AM
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This was feedback posted for Mr. Hahn
IP: 9E2F CDE8
checkin-ness........................................
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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05-31-05, 11:50 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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06-03-05, 02:53 PM
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#24
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Stanza
Stanza You Got Lucky That Han Lacked A Storyline... Aiight Its Like This... Stanza Had Consistant Flow, Good Emotion And Imagry... Also What Won This For Him Was The Storyline... Han Completely Lacked Something To Fallow Along With... And Althought It Had Amazing Vocab, Imagry And Flow Was Straight... You've GOT To Have A Storyline, Its A Topical... That Is The Point Of Topical Writing... Pretty Good Battle Though... Han Just Work On Your Storylines And Concepts... Then You Could Be Great... .One. |
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06-03-05, 11:22 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
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06-05-05, 11:35 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0825 899A
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06-06-05, 04:47 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: Stanza
Creativity - This was close but Stanza Flow - Hahn On topic - Stanza (just) Enjoyment - Both Illest concept/Line - Stanza : well Becuase I Made it Out of This Mentally Sane Becuase Nothing Can Bring More Pain Than Summer Rain dope dope dope overall - ILL READ! well it was good anyway lol appreciated but vote - stanza v.hard to decide catagories were so close in choosing Stay up |
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06-06-05, 11:09 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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06-07-05, 06:10 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
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06-08-05, 11:37 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
Voted For: Stanza
Aight Its Like This.. Stanza: Simlpe Vocabulary Here, and When I First Started Reading Mr. Hahns I Was Like DamN His Vocab Sick, but Then I Looked Deeply and His Shit Was Overworded and Didn't Make Sense. Your Piece Had A Sort-of Poetic Justice Feel To It Which I Like. Not My Topic of Choice LoL, but Ya'll Did Ya Thing. Mr. Hahn: Man, You Tried To Put All That Vocab In, but When You Do That You Have To Make Sure Its Not Overclouding and That It Makes Sense. With Sucha Simple Topic As This, You Went Way Beyond What You Should've. This Took Away From The Read and Feel of Your Topic. Vote - Stanza For Better Overall Topical Verse. ~R~ |
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