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View Poll Results: Kidz About To Get Whored !!!
50 bars 0 0%
King Solo 5 100.00%
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Old 06-03-05, 11:36 PM   #16
Chris Stylez
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This was feedback posted for King Solo

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Im givin it to Solo just mainly for crucial personals

Solo

Flow- Flow was nice a lil stretch but ya did ya thang.
Punches- His face is bruised simple as that.
Personals- You crushed him N if i was Barz i would of posted that.
Metas- Could of had more
Opener- 8/10
Middle-7/10
Closer-9/10 lol da shit was funny

Barz
You held yours down but u just got crushed by personals
Flow- Was nice N easier to read but not enuff to cop da win
Punches- He'll recover but i think they could of been nicer
Personals- Was alright but could of been better
Metas- Could of been better
Opener-6.5/10
Middle-7.5/10
Closer-7/10

Note- Keep workin N elvatin yall both great

Winner= King Solo


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Old 06-04-05, 12:14 AM   #17
Stanza
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Voted For: King Solo


Aii My vote Is goin to Solo

Explanation

This kids styles kindergarden by his text u can tell i'm not wrong
So someone block this site and send him to www.nick.com
Played concept
3,000 posts for you man u gotta addiction to rap boards?
U live in a country with hot chicks..wait ur Pussy so u gotta be that board
Same word ryming is a
U all got this kid mixed up with realness real shit u aint illness
HE RECYCLES HIS LINES EVERYTIME HOW U Really FEAL THIS
Wheres a punch?.....You lackin a punch in this one
Aint texted in multiple months no need too front up front
Its been a while i'mma little rusty but i could still take this cunt
...........Punchez?./..............Where are you punchez?
SHit i bet he like damn shoulda takin it harder my skill a lil farther
You came all this way its the end ur gonna lose like the team on coach carter
....... man Your Stuff is serously lackin wordplay and punchez and your personals didnt hit hard like they shouldve bcuz your wordplay was very weak

Solo
Damn man, I guess I can forget about matchin you pound-4-pound
Cuz looking at you son, its clear it aint just the Earth that’s round
...::weak::..
Yea we in different countries, but this fat fuck’s still standin in my way
It’s ’50 bars’ right, must be talkin the amount of candy you eat in one day
LOL That was very smart
Ya don’t pass with skillz..Ure an MC, ya must be packin a fake I.D
Infector Mindz..yea, cuz ya fucked ya dad in the head and gave him HIV
..... YOU couldve done better
Ya slip when ya try to beat people, try not overdoin it with the lube
Didn’t have to reset ya account, cuz either way ya looked like a newb
............Nop Punch or wordplay there ....jus a weak personal
Man, this dude’s spittin up hairballz...just watch as this cat chokes
And I’m talkin about you and ya verse when I say it’s a big fat joke
....Made me Giggle But still Not your best
I’ll say farewell to ya cuz ya should know ya spittin for the final time
Cuz………”CANDY CANDY CANDY”……
…………………………ya fat ass is gettin banned for bitin this line
You shouldve rymed that with "bar" Bcuz nobody eats lines LOL but I Get what You were sayin Nice Verse

Overall

i fell That SOlo Supplied a more effecient verse and more Hard punch although they werent all that for him but compared to 50 bars The shit was aii so my vote goes to SOlo

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Old 06-04-05, 01:01 AM   #18
King Solo
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uppin this shit again

already voted on them battles stanza.............werd
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Old 06-04-05, 11:34 AM   #19
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: King Solo

V/King Solo.....this was one sided....solo came wit cretive punchs that killed 50....also good vocab an word play....an structure....50 u came way to lightly for solo....he merked ur whole verse....u had some played punchs stretched lines an nuthin creative....work on those things...No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR..............
Opener=k
CLoser=k
Structure=k
Punchs=k
Personals=k
Wordplay=k
Multi's=None really
Vocab=K
Overall=King Solo
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Old 06-04-05, 02:33 PM   #20
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Voted For: King Solo

Word word solo..

SOLO

1. hahah nice personal and punch man it worked well as a bar.. 9/10
2. Shit.. another hard punch and personal.. 9/10
3. Not as hard as others though still good with the nameplay and personal.. 8/10
4. nice punch... worked well 8/10
5. hahah nice punch.. and semi-personal... solo's just rippin this 8/10
6. OOO shit haha nice closer.. 9/10

50 Bars

1. weak opener.. all .com rhymes are played.. 6/10
2. not feelin it.. boards... board... just not feelin the line.. prolly with the wording.. 6/10
3. not a bad punch.. not hard hard.. but good.. 7/10
4. not feelin it.. you shoulda thrown more of a punch in the first line.. seemed like filler... 7/10
5. ehhh so so line...nothin personal there.. just a punch.. not feelin it fully.... 7/10

Overall Solo got this battle.. he had personals in almost every line.. and his punches were good.. 50 bars.. just work on the punches.. you'll get better at em.. think of more complex shit.. not basic stuff...


RETURN THE FAVOR SOLO...

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