Staring with a cold face, thoughts Subliminal
Its hard to look in the mirror everyday to see a Criminal
Got two guns, a 9 in one hand and a 45 in the Other
Got two shells, One in the chamber and one in my Brother
Its more distinct, More Fainter..more bright, More Tainter
As I begin to draw first blood like Gore Painters
Triggers realeased, you hit the ground with a Hollow Sound
Gunsmoke all around, empty shells Follow Down
Watching your blood spill out with flashbacks of Past Deaths
Your heart races as you take your Last Breathes
Locked behind lead bars, sitting without Remorse
My DNA found on ya body, I fucked Your Corpse
I move away from imprisonment with my back Towards Winds
Walking with a purpose, looking for Gore Again

Locked behind lead bars, sitting without Remorse
My DNA found on ya body, I fucked Your Corpse

Lmao nice


Flow was nice
Content was nice
Enjoyed the read def
Stay up fam

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Aight thanks man

Uppin for more feedback on this shit

Wow..cmon people. Drop some fucking feedback

Uppin

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Lol..Wow...

Uppin for some feedback once again.

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tight lyrics..but first thangs first...no matter where u go you'll always find out nobody likes e-thugz...i mean if it's ur thang then it's ur thang but dont do it over the net and be who u are 98% of net-thugz aint thugz in real life..so if u frontin best think bout cuttin that childish shit out...not sayin u are im just sayin if u are....ur structure's not all the greatist try ur best at makin the lines match up from beginning to end..dont have them run all over the place..that's carelessness..u might have ta reword and respell alotta lines and words ta make them line up..but it turns out better when ur done...like i said before the vocab is tight keep it comin wit those hard lyrics and complex multi's...otherwise u did alrite....6.5/10 all together...8/10 for multis

I move away from imprisonment with my back Towards Winds
Walking with a purpose, looking for Gore Again-best lines right thurrr.....like straight said, ur structure needs some work but u gon be something on this site keep postin keep elevatin.....7/10 multi's and overall.......7/10 lol.....good shit mayne

Nobody said I was a net thug. Its not being a net thug to talk about a criminal. This was an open mic...SMH, Ehh its whatever.

Uppin

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man straight aim stfu u dont know wth ur talking about lol.. pro good job on this keep it up.. and keep repping TE.. pz man

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My Lines Are ILL yo