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Old 06-06-05, 08:22 PM   #1
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Still Tipping (K-Trini Diss)

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Nigga What You Know About Shitting On Ho's
Flipping These Ho's
Ripping On Ho's
Bitch What You Know About Spitting On Ho's
Clipping These Ho's
Splitting On Ho's
Nigga What You Know About.......



Look Dummy You Got A lot Of Nerve
Shook Dunny You Got A Nada Verse
Bitch You Lame So Switch Your Name
Missed It Mayn So I Piss On Your Brain
This Shit's A Shame This Kid's A Lame
Lip's All In Pain Kid Got Shit On Dayum*
Laced With Pricks Just Face It Bitch
Rated It As Fag's........Gay And Shits
Made To Spit?.......I Missed That Fact
Fade To Quick...... Now Kiss This Mac
Gun Name Sure Throw Thangs At You
Range Out Fool, Frame Changing Dude
You Finna Taste,...It All Up In Your Place
Bin A Change.....We All Up In Your Face


Nigga What You Know About Shitting On Ho's
Flipping These Ho's
Ripping On Ho's
Bitch What You Know About Spitting On Ho's
Clipping These Ho's
Splitting On Ho's
Nigga What You Know About.......


Lead In Home, Spread Your Dome
Fed Is Gone, Beef? Let's Get Shit On
Jack & Jill, You Sat Down The Hill
Lacking Skill, Make You Back Peel
This Kid's A Faggot Just Battered Cake
Bang Rag, Punches...Get A Fatter Face
Packing Chrome Strapt Like Fanni Packs
Rap In Home' This Kat's Like Handi Caps
Last Time I Checked K-Trini's A Bitch Name
Lack Respect, Next You Like That Hitch Game
I'm Pitching Thangs To Re Fix Your Frame
Like Cricket Games I'm Still Ripping Lames
Your Progress Spit Can't Process Shits
Me Daubs $ Miss Just E Robbed This Bitch


Nigga What You Know About Shitting On Ho's
Flipping These Ho's
Ripping On Ho's
Bitch What You Know About Spitting On Ho's
Clipping These Ho's
Splitting On Ho's
Nigga What You Know About.......

*Dayum Rhymes With It Depends on How You Say It
It's A Fast Rap To The Still Tipping Beat Remixed By G-Unit And Them, You Got To Rap It like Fast When You Read It

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Old 06-07-05, 12:32 AM   #2
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Old 06-08-05, 12:23 AM   #3
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Lol I Love You To Shorty Bump Bump
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Old 06-08-05, 07:52 PM   #4
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Bump Bump Keep Em' Up Yo!
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Old 06-10-05, 01:39 AM   #5
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i dont hate i love all yall lol
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Old 06-10-05, 04:01 AM   #6
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Lol...Bumping.............
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Old 06-10-05, 08:13 PM   #7
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Old 06-10-05, 08:56 PM   #8
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feelin it we should colaab some time nuccka i like the tippin beat e.z
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Old 06-10-05, 09:14 PM   #9
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Yo to be honest i wasn't really feelin this. Thats not to say this was a terrible piece, but i think it needed a lot of work on structure and the addition of advanced vocab in place of basic words would've benefitted this piece immensely.
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Old 06-10-05, 10:15 PM   #10
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ok dis wasnt a good dis at all yo rhyme scheme was to easy 1st of all and stop writin and big font it make it look newbiest and the diss was jus str8 up wack your verse diss was betta den dis one you should really elevate try doin somemore kinds of open mic cus disses doesnt work fo you no beef
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Old 06-10-05, 10:33 PM   #11
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Monopoly???

Who the fuk are you.I hope you know that now U perpetually beefin wit me.There ain't gon be squaching beef.Expect a reply to this soon.

Shouldn't be hard considering how wak this was.
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Old 06-10-05, 10:54 PM   #12
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Lol, Kid Don't Test Me, And Blah I Wrote This When I Was High Niggas Can Fuck Off, You Straight Up K-Trini I Will Merk You Son
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Old 06-10-05, 10:55 PM   #13
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werd this sukked flow was ok only becuz of tha short ass structure lines were weak rymes sukked wordplay there was none punches also none metas none this couldve been better if writtin by monkeyz elevate alot both of you
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