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NewKid | 2 | 28.57% | |
AckRite | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-23-05, 06:08 AM | #16 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 459B FC30
Voted For: AckRite
ackrite getz diz win hiz verse wuz rite on point on da flow and punchlinez da only thang i wuznt feeling wuz dat closer frum u ackrite da rest of da verse wuz reel hot an da flow wuz fukking on point where as newkid yo verse wuz pretty uncreative an itz all stuff dat iz generally played out, whurr iz yo creativity dawg? newkids verse wuz ok but dere wuz nuthing in da verse dat made ackrite look like a fool so i base mih vote on dat, ackrite getz da win an it'd be kool if yull culd return da vote in mih battlez |
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05-23-05, 12:25 PM | #17 | |
I'm a closet fag.
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IP: 4A0A BEB6
Voted For: AckRite
AckRite... Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'! Not to shabby...6/10 Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid! Nice punch...8/10 Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'! Meh...5/10 Overall: 19/30 NewKid... u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite? Meh...4/10 u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G' Self Glory really, but okay wordplay...5/10 ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off' Not bad...6/10 Overall: 15/30 AckRite came with better punches basically.. Vote: AckRite Return the favour with an honest vote on the link in my sig.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-24-05, 09:00 PM | #18 |
Home Of Philly
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IP: 7906 D4D5
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05-25-05, 06:06 PM | #19 |
Home Of Philly
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05-25-05, 10:30 PM | #20 |
Home Of Philly
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05-27-05, 10:48 PM | #21 | |
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 9EBC 4FAF
Voted For: AckRite
NewKid's verse was complete trash, ounded like a 3rd grader talking shit and happening to put words that rhyme on the end...really simple stuff that's ultra generic...you failed every attempt at a punch =/... yeah definetly never heard that "paying your tolls" line and it was a nyce finish for the line above it, it fit well together, most people try and put one concept all into one line and forget that they got more bars to make it come full circle...name play on the next set was aiight...werd, last set was pretty nyce man... iono why anybody but AckRite has a voTe but whatever, everyone has their different tastes and I happen to have the BETTER taste ... VOTE: AckRite |
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05-27-05, 10:49 PM | #22 | |
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for NewKid
IP: 31E1 91F6
shitt..........this dude got like 10 battles open. but i still think you took this. just a lil off wit tha structure, but still tha overall beter verse...but i cant vote...
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05-27-05, 10:52 PM | #23 | |
Home Of Philly
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IP: 0F7A 2931
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frogger get da fukk out of hurr u ugli as geico |
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05-28-05, 11:16 AM | #24 | |
==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: 9445 4168
Voted For: NewKid
Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'! Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid! Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'! Some Iight Wordplay Dawg,. Nuthin 2 Personal, So I Wuznt Feeling Dat, Flow Wuz Pretty Solid, Punchez Culd Ov Been Better In Placez, U Needed Mo Consistancy, Good Drop Tho & Propps Goes Out Fo Dat Opener Tho, Dat Wuz Fiyah u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite? u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G' ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off' Yo Verse Kept Me Mo Intrested NewKid, Da Flow Wuz Good, Disses Wuz On Point, Dat Closer Wuz Real Tite, Good Shit There Dawg, Wuznt Feeling Da Opening Line 2 Da ''Screamed NewKid Or G'' Puncvh, But U Had Da Better Read, An U Stayed On Point, Where As Ackrite Had Hot Wordplay, But Sum Of Da Punchez Wuzza Little Random Vote/NewKid Return Da Favpor In Mah Battle Wit Skriptz, Link In In Da Signature
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05-28-05, 04:35 PM | #25 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: DD1B 42B4
Yo Dis Nigga Gets Everyone Of My Votes DQ'd..........Come On Man, Theres No Way Imma Win This He Gon DQ Every Damn Vote
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05-28-05, 05:34 PM | #26 | |
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 90A6 CC43
NewKid, STFU you loser...iono WHY da heck people are voTing for you, ya verse was trash, flow was horrible, all you did was throw in some words that rhymed on the end...your shit was completely elementary man...don't even battle no more, quit now...and quit being a pussy and getting voTes disQualified when they ARE explained retard...and BTW, besides working on actual punchez, you need to work on your flow, learn how to write raps, PERIOD...
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05-31-05, 09:21 PM | #27 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: 1A55 81FC
Aeyo Vote Up In This Shit.......Its Been Up Long Enough........Half My Votes DQ'd For NO REASON Also
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06-03-05, 05:01 PM | #28 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: CB80 5038
My Record Is BLAH.............Uppin For Votes..................I Hate Comin Back 2 See No Votes
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06-11-05, 12:59 PM | #29 | ||
Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: 8D46 FB2C
Aeyo Uppin This Shit For Some Votes....EXPLAIN EM....Since None Of Them Is Bein Counted Ne Way...........
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06-11-05, 11:23 PM | #30 | |
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IP: 2AB0 331B
Voted For: AckRite
u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite? .. hell no u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G' nah, this shit was mad-weak here ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off' decent & ur best line overall ..shit ur verse was weak.. only 1 bar wasn’t wack but the rest was... but anyway.. elevate though.. & work on ur structure.. quit with the .................... shit.. Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'! decent opener Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid! decent Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'! wack closer overall .. u had an aight drop, shit was kinda weak though but ur punches were pretty-much on point in this battle.. structure was aight & the flow was decent.. but don’t put ur verse in small-size.. just makes it look wack like that.. but u took this battle though ..just came harder w/ the punches & all-that
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