Rhyming Like EMINEM #2

I like chocolate when I rock it so eating a critical Hershey
Ill like Jerome kersey but face political controversy
My quotes hot don’t know whether to vote or not
Is this a hoax or plot, plum bold come to the poles forgot
My hardcore glock it’s in the car doors lock now on the spot
Wanna make a smart correction like art collection knock
Pictures off wall because political scriptures false and all
Sometimes judicial powers are like artificial flowers, fall
And don’t bloom, if I vote democratic could have slim static
With NWA and trouble with DRE now undecided I’ve had it
Neither candidate has a plan great may not be clever to
Pull this lever I may forever regret this, now this is an endeavor true
Need a little peace in the Middle East stop the war? They never do
Oppose my insides now close my eyes committed a sin pray AMEN
Voting is a stunt bazaar ran jumped in the car cranked it then in the wind
Throttled home got a bottle of dome got drunk as a skunk voting
Is a right but hoping is a fight that never end it leaves punks gun toting

ok heres the deal :

ur alright with the flow..ur structure is cool..u gettin better with the multies..but YOU STILL SUCK.....

..and 1 more thing..jerome kersey is not ill..he sucks almost as bad as you.......

how can you rate something you can't write? homey

Umm, this was wack. The flow was off at some points and the whole idea of the concept of the piece was completley retarded.

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YO MAD RAPPER...........YOU ARE FUCKIN SHIT MAN........u need to get the fuck outta here punk

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I failed to see how this relates to eminem

I also failed to see skill

stuff was off the hook to any multi-rhymer that don't write whack poetry like the cats on this below average site right here

U ARE GAY u fuckin pussy.....ure shit n sabotage wud kill u

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this shit was off the hook a lot of lies being told for real yo

yea you can write...but this made no sense at all
really your not gettin the whole point that you gotta write
shit that makes sense man... honestly...keep to a topic or at least
make the transfer of topics sense-able...please cause it just reads
off like gibberish
eminem himself could write this n ide say the same thing...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

dont mean ta knock u off of ur cloud but ur shit didnt really make sense..and failed ta be like shady's rhymes, just try ta get better at describin shit through ur rhymes thats all....can ya rock a hershey bar????? are hersheys really critical????

JUST ADMIT THAT YOU'RE TEN DEGREES BELOW MADDRAPPER IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS SHOULDN'T BE WRITING VERSES SHOULD HAVE YOUR STUPID ASS IN SCHOOL (HA! HA1 HA! COME ON GROW THE FUCK UP

I like chocolate when I rock it so eating a critical Hershey
Ill like Jerome kersey but face political controversy
My quotes hot don’t know whether to vote or not
Is this a hoax or plot, plum bold come to the poles forgot
My hardcore glock

made no sense whatsoever
and MADDRAPPER is a rapper signed under eminem if i ain't mistaken

so its time for a name change buddy

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I had to get off the boat so i could walk on water

RF FOREVA EVA EVA EVA

Hell I Had This Name Before That Happened Can't Help It If My Name Is Loved By Platinum Rappers, But You Look Stupid Not Understanding Rap Ass Hole