iiight first off the structure is off. i cant really understand bieng that its choppy n all over the place.

Chosen words, soothe and caress my fractured heart.
I've been searching for the answer...
Although I've been blinded by love from the very start.
See we love each other, but then complications brew.
& I can't face losing her, so I've learnt to talk to you.
^^^this type of rhyme schemeis not nice bcuz after the four lines you switch it up as so.

Guide me with a faint direction, release me from this feeling.
Let me view her intentions, the ones I haven't been seeing.
You need to comfort me, I can't divide my longing...or my love.
When the only thing that can halt this, is from you above.
^^^ok this is were the scheme changed a lil, u went from 5 lines to 4 lines, this needs alot of work done to it. but just my opinion.

Since you cup a sense of wonder, let me see the light with thunder.
Let me please, make her realise that I feel...Nor see anything in another.
Sinking, I'm plundering in her accusations, plummeting in false deceit.
I wouldn't be able to breathe, thinking she never gained anything from me.
I plead to you, possessing this beauty is all I want, she means so much.
But, no reply from the clouds above, passion chokes as love unfurls...
From an open cut.
^^^then it switches up again, to many lines now, i dont know wha to say this just needs alot of work.