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Old 06-20-05, 08:09 PM   #1
SixX da FinisH
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Im Bac At It.. A Lil Rusty....

IP: 0825 899A

been gone for like 6 months... lets see if i still got this text shyt...

yo....
Im Bac At It, like a lapse from breakin a bad-habit
I aint Nas, but tha kid stay wit the still(steel)-matic
This text game needed the takover, so ya boi is bac
I came to "Get It Poppin'" like ya boi is Crack!
The don-carry-on, on ma hip-stays a switch-blade
I dig-graves, battlin me's like a bad-pic, a mis-take
I drag-clips cuz im heavy loaded-wit-weapons
Step to me, have ya torso torn open-n-severed

damn thats weak... tell me what yall think i need work on... thx
~6~
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Old 06-20-05, 08:13 PM   #2
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please..why do a open mic like this? 1st off, who really cares?
Try writing someshit people are gonna be interested in dawg
You could have came at this with better lyrics and metaphors...
me personally im not impressed...but then again that's just me!
4/10..whack concept
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Old 06-21-05, 03:14 AM   #3
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loseyourself in the music the moments you own it youu better never let itgo you only get one shot and notmiss the chance that blows thisoportunity comes once in a life time you better call your maid and ask her to do hotcakes
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Old 06-21-05, 03:48 AM   #4
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u had pretty good multies but it lacked any kind of substance.. metas were so so.. keep workin fam
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Old 06-21-05, 12:17 PM   #5
SixX da FinisH
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thx for the actual feedbac.... good look... for the haters.. set it up...
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