Ayo, round my hood they dissin’ tha shit outta me cuz I rap and I’m tryin’ ta get another record deal. So I wrote this song for all those punks who think I won’t make it.
FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
PERMISSION TA SHINE
CHORUS
I’ve lied of sighed, my way to tha top/ I’m still not there but yet I won’t stop/ proceed with lead decision mind/ now I’m askin’ y’all for that permission ta shine/
VERSE 1
An Eminem wannabe, that’s what’s on top of me/ be what I wanna be, ain’t none of y’all is stoppin’ me/ robbin’ me, just cuz I’m a salt of tha Earth/ assault is a cert, you gon’ fall in tha dirt/ ain’t stallin’ the hurt that you crooked foolz asked fo/ shred off ya flesh look as skinny as Anto*/ actors like a panto, no wonder yo concerned/ cuz trust just cannot be gained or even earned/ nothin’ was learned when I said gimmicks is sore/ when I’m at my limit I have ta give it more/ slam doors, without let up or pardon/ drink out of tha carton, have ta be hardened/ at an early age, we was made ta believe, completely talentless, we might as well leave/ but screw that rumor now I know it was soft/ and screw sayin’ I got skill should be showin’ it off/

CHORUS X2

VERSE 2
Look round ya hood, then you feel dishellved/ can’t believe there’s such things as criminals at 12/ look yaself, see there, there is tha posh posse/ start a war there more like kamikaze/ see that body? Sorry that’s not tha topic/ digress, soundin’ crazier then an alcoholic/ got no time ta frolic, waste valuable time/ say ya master of the rhyme, can you handle mine?/ that’s how I shine, beatin’ other M.C’s ta tha line/ cuz they tha type of peeps that would say dine/ instead of eat, on tha beat under pressure/ one minute wack as hell tha next rhymin’ professor/ like anyone lesser, ain’t here ta please anyone/ but until I get a deal I ain’t havin’ no fun/ screw no guns, I rollin’ wit my rebels/ who’s war cry is ‘WE ARE THA LITTLE DEVILS’/ and I agree wit ‘em at every single level/ pity one such army is yet ta be assembled/ upended, durin’ this rap cuz I landed/ wit a loada bad thoughts like I was a bandit/ and it, was somethin’ weird as hell/ even stranger it’s a story that I’m here ta tell/ well tha thing that I felt was like Mi Intro*/ not tha fact that it was great, just really simple/ was a sensation, but really nothin’ I/ thought my stuff wouldn’t sell, stupid wasn’t I (laughter)/

CHORUS X2

VERSE 3
O.K, this is a really simple concept/ but might as well spit it, since I am not wrecked/ not yet, am I at tha end of tha tunnel/ that’s how I get motivated, when I’m befuddled/ ta tha fact that I am not yet famous/ you prolly don’t see tha effort that it takes ta sustain this/ ignoramus, didn’t make tha effort/ all you even thought was ‘yep Caesa you’ve said it/ told ya gimme some credit, you just retorted it/ though I’m makin’ an effort for those less fortunate/ of course it is somethin’ of top priority/ though I’m in a minority, I don’t act sorrily/ cuz what’s tha use of takin’ abuse wit ya head down/ it’s not as though ya parents’ll say settle down/ like a kettle sound steamin’ up/ hate tha Lotto, but if it come’s I’m feelin’ look/ blowin’ people through tha roof, but tha ceilin’ suck/ a homie more evil then a drug-dealin’ book/ so I see what’s up, that’s why I’m seein’ a hater/ batterin’ tha hell outta an administrator/ if a record person’s listin’, I’ll see ya later/ permission ta shine blowin’ you up like Tomb Raider/

CHORUS FADE OUT

Hope ya liked that, it might be on audio pretty soon so sit tite. Aight peace out from ya 12-year old Irish homie.

*Anto is an anorexic guy at my school
*Mi Intro is tha first song on my album ‘Talez from Tha Valley’ (Comin’ Soon!)

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