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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
NaRc-UzI 4 57.14%
Black Queen 3 42.86%
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Old 06-20-05, 10:57 PM   #31
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
From: bronx
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Uppin Dis Battle..........................................
 
Old 06-21-05, 09:50 AM   #32
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
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uppin............................................. ..........
 
Old 06-21-05, 04:25 PM   #33
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
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upppinn........................................... ...........
 
Old 06-21-05, 07:34 PM   #34
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
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uppin............................................. ................
 
Old 06-21-05, 07:50 PM   #35
J.Terror
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Voted For: Black Queen

my vote//NaRc
Punches- NaRc
Wordplay-NaRc
Meta's-NaRc
Flow- Tie
Personals- n/e
Overall- NaRc's verse wasn't that tight, his world play was a bit corny at times, but the majority of his punches landed nicely, with the occacional filler. On the other hand Blck Queen had ok set ups...and her bars just drifted like light wood...never landing as she may have expected. Keep ya heads up...deUce

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Old 06-21-05, 11:48 PM   #36
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
From: bronx
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Im Up 4-1 Still Uppin This..................................
 
Old 06-22-05, 12:56 AM   #37
YOUNG_CITY
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Voted For: Black Queen

I think bQ took this one because her disses were stronger, and made more since. I wasnt too much feelin tha personals from either one of you, and BQ's disses couldve been directed towards anyone (most of em), but they were still by far, stronger. her structure and flow to her verse was wayy better also. BQ get's my vote. Easyily. She just came harder and wanted this one more. Narc, all them " "'s are not needed. Most of em didnt even have good wordplay, and they were simple, and irrelevant.

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Old 06-22-05, 04:54 AM   #38
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Voted For: Black Queen

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
—weak opener
Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
—nah, 2nd line is played here
You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
—aight..
Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
—fuck outta hea
In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
—okay, this one was aight
"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"
—wack closer

overall your drop was weak, punches were pretty much weak
throughout the whole shit, one of them was aight, & another one
was played here, the structure was okay, & the flow was lackin here
ur punches need to be harder hittin in ur other battles..
..no hate



its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
—multies were okay, punch was weak
this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
—okay
take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
—this one was coo
It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
—aight
In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
—no
You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
—uhh, not really hard-hittin here
I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
—hah, this one was aight
I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate
decent closer

overall – ur drop was aight.. pretty much same to Uzi here
except.. ur flow was okay here, instead of lacking here, the
structure was okay, punches were pretty much harder hittin
than Uzi’s.. but overall u came harder then Uzi in this battle
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Old 06-22-05, 05:05 AM   #39
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This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI

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checking polls............and good battle here (thumbup)
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Old 06-22-05, 10:16 AM   #40
NaRc-UzI
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From: bronx
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im up 4-3 still uppin.............................
 
Old 06-22-05, 12:19 PM   #41
Black Queen
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No It's tied 3-3 ur not up sorry to bust ya bubble
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Old 06-22-05, 01:02 PM   #42
J.Terror
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lmao @ this site..what the fuck happened to my vote?
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Old 06-22-05, 06:04 PM   #43
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI



Narc-Uzi:

After im done wit you you wont be able to jump but youll have plenty "hang-time"
Narcs punches are like underground bombs cause im known to "land-mine"
Ok Metaphor..Not A Punch Though..4/10
Uzi "got to cough" and yell bullshit when you rhyme cause ur "verses aint hot"
Cause this queens idea of "finishin me off" involves her "lickin my cock"
Played and Wack..3/10
You gotta "understand" that "my guns" and "my hands" aint "never divorcin"
Im not "outta proportion" but my rhymes will give Black Queens verse an "early abortion"
Ok..5/10
Lets be "realistic" and tell everybody that you just a "barbie"
You dont want to "go to war" but you wish that you "are me"(army)
Weak..3/10
In this battle your like "discharged credit cards" cause your "win is declined"
I told Queen lets meet "face to face" but she said "no" i preffer it from "behind"
Wack..3/10
"Queen is lame" and cant take me out like "cranberry barry stains"
"Its a shame" that she be blowing on my dick like old "nintendo games"(lmao)
Ok Metaphor..5/10

Overall: 23/60

Black Queen:

its figure fucking point, ready to take a situation
or take situation for hostage, make a hostage situation
Hmm..Blah..3/10
this kid needs obliteratin’.. if you fucking talking the shit
prove yourself to me, and I’ll give you a shot-to the chest bitch
Wack...Gangsta Talk? 2/10
take a stab at your temple, like killing sprees in churches
you still wouldnt win even if I called myself wack on purpose?
Wack..2/10
It's no mystery, like Lucifer, you're falling from grace
Needs a week to write; he only makes four dope bars in a day
Blah..Beat...3/10
In a way, your spit purified water cuz you've got a plain flow
This a battle to the death only cuz your style's it's slow and painful
Not A Punch or Metaphor or Nething..2/10
You couldn't be silent and deadly if you were passing gas
So forget about your finals, you ain't passin' class
Weak..2/10
I'm nice with writs, like wrestlin' matches, I'll put him in a casket, y'all
Whenever he posts up, he stands under the hoop in basketball
Not Feeling This..3/10
I'm better; even a model could spit your verse in a hotter way
Only Deepthroat you know of is the informant from Watergate
Blah..4/10

Overall: 21/80

Vote - Narc-Uzi For Actual Punches and Metaphors. Black Just Used A Bunch of Gangsta Talk and That Isn't A Diss Verse...I Felt Narc Took This Easy.

~R~
 
Old 06-22-05, 06:29 PM   #44
MS.Imp3rf3ct
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

yo much respect to both of yall.......i gota give this one tp queen becuz her vocab was ill, and the punches hit hard....yo but uzi you keep comen up cuz your verse was hot to.

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Old 06-23-05, 10:26 AM   #45
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
From: bronx
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still uppin............................................. .
 
 


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