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SPuL aka Reckless 5 55.56%
1ndeph 4 44.44%
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Old 06-26-05, 12:08 AM   #16
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^LMAO dumbass, they can't see that post........ lmao.... idiot
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Old 06-26-05, 02:03 AM   #17
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LMFAO @ dont get it, fuck you! and then explaining it all.. lololol weerd I might vote after with an alias if everyone is ok with that?
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Old 06-26-05, 01:18 PM   #18
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eh.... i don't care.......................................
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Old 06-26-05, 01:49 PM   #19
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Spul-Shit flowed nice through the whole thing.But you were talking about how he looked.Did Indeph eva post his pictures.Or is it fake personals.Ur punches were bassically weak.Speccially the one where ya TRIED to rip his name.

Indeph-Shit wasn't so hot...but it was ight.Had some decent personals that wasn't fake.Flow was good.But next time...make ur punches harder

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Old 06-26-05, 02:09 PM   #20
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Indepth-

Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.

^^Made me seriously crack up..lol

Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.


^^U could have twisted differently. to make it more complex its plain now..its ok...


SPL-

Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)


^hahaha...nice personal + Punch...is nice how its worded.


Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose

^^looked at the pic seriously...lol wow kinda simplistic though..


Posteboy line was played dont eva use it..omg.

Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas


^^another personal..lol

I think honestly it was close, but reread the verses twice and went into the personals really. i think i have to give my judgements based on punches and personals.

V/Sp


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Old 06-26-05, 02:46 PM   #21
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This was a fuckin close to call battle, not to mention dope..

First off SPuL:

Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)

NICE PERSONAL BUT NOT REALY A PUNCH, FEELIN THE WORDPLAY THOUGH.

Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose

OMGOMG LMFAO LOLO LOL.... FUNNY AS FUCK, 10/10 FOR THE ORIGINALITY AND PERSONAL AND PUNCH...NICE.

You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself

DECENT PUNCH.

Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat

DECENT SET-UP, PLAYED PUNCH IMO.

Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas

MEH, WAS A PERSONAL BUT NOT REALLY FEELIN THE PUNCH.

Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D

AGAIN NICE PERSOANL AND DECENT WORDPLAY AND PUNCH.

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Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.

NICE OPENER AND A DECENT PERSONAL, IT HIT HARD.

April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute

MEH, PLAYED CONCEPT...NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH AT ALL.

1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.

GOOD PERSONALS IN SET UP AND PUNCH, NICE.

.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase

AGAIN A PERSONAL, BUT A WEAK PUNCH ON THE END..

if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.

MEH, WEAKER THAN YOUR OTHERS..

Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.

NICE PERSONAL NAME PLAY AND WORDPLAY, GOOD CLOSER.

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ITS OBVIOUS BOTH HAVE MAD TALENT AND THIS IS CLOSE TO CALL, BOTH HAD VERSES PACKED WITH PUNCHES AND PERSONALLS..

THE REASON SPUL GETS MY VOTE IS BECAUSE IN MY OPINION HIS PERSONALS HIT HARDER...THAT NOSE LINE HAD ME LAUGHIN LITERALLY. HE ALSO HAD GOOD WORDPLAY AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT.

1NDEPH, YOU DIDNT DO ANYTHING WRONG REALLY, YOU HAD NICE PUNCHES AND THAT LAST BAR WAS KILLER, SPUL JUST CAME HARDER TO ME.

WILL BE A CLOSE ONE.

NO HATE.
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Old 06-26-05, 03:17 PM   #22
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yo
i knew this was gon be a hot battle once i saw this thread...
and weerd, yall know ima be honest since im so tight with both you guys...

but personally, i think that deph took this...

spul man, i was expecting more out of your verse i think...
ive seen you do some real nice shit, that wasnt really at par with this...
you did have some good punches though
the best in my book were the nose one, and the one about his girl and the meat or some shit...lmao
but the rest of the lines were just ok
there were a few i didnt like though, like the "in deaf" one, i personally thought it was a bit dull..
your flow was pretty consistant...

deph kid you had a nice solid verse...
a great choice for an opener, with the myspace line, probably my favorite line from the verse...
your flow was consistant through your verse as well, but what it really comes down to is the punches...
the line about spuls bro was great, and your closer was the perfect way to end it in my book...
with the exception of about one or two lines, all of em were solid for the most part, which is really why you get my vote...

weerd good battle yall, id like to see another one sometime...
v/ indeph

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Old 06-26-05, 03:45 PM   #23
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WTf iv got 5 wins so why cant i post a vote
fuck it
a favour is a favour
ill edit this in2 a vote when i can

Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.

Str8 personal

April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute

Ok

1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.

Lol

.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase

Wack

if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.

Pretty tight

Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.

Lower case, keyboard lines are played as hell


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Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)

Tight

Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose

Lmfao funny as hell and hit kinda hard

You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself

Weak

Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat

Weak

Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas

Weak

Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D

Ok

Creativity = Spul
Opener = Spul
Closer = Spul
Personals = Spul
Punches = ID
Flow = Both
Overall = Spul


yo, spul fell off hard towards the end wiv a dope openeing as indepth was kinda ok thru out but i felt spul was hiitting harder and deserves the winnn

Vote = spul
will use as a aproper vote whn i know how 2
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Old 06-26-05, 03:48 PM   #24
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you probably couldn't do a proper vote cause your account wasn't upgraded.
When I had a low post count I couldn't vote either.When u get 500 try again.

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Old 06-26-05, 04:11 PM   #25
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damn yall both had sum tight verses....ima start out wit quotin my favorite bars from each verse:

spul:"Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D"

1ndeph:"April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute"
^i also liked that myspace line...but it didnt really flow rite???

but overall...i had to go wit spul cuz his whole verse flowed well...u both had good personals...but 1ndeph u didnt hav enuff...and spul ahd the better opening and closing bars...

but no doubt this was a good battle
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Old 06-26-05, 05:37 PM   #26
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Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
2/10...Doesnt fit

April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
3/10..Didnt work eitheir

1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
8/10....Lol...Hot

.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
4/10...EH OK

if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
3/10....No

Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
7/10....Nice Closer

U had good concepts
but ya punches werent connecting
kinda like u was jus talkin instead of punches
i jus got out of this problem...of a punch lookin
like a punch...but its really not...use more similies
and metas and u woulda had diss...

45%...

Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
7/10...Nice punch off his name

Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
6/10....Lol...another funny concept

You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
5/10....eh coulda been worded better

Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
3/10.....No..1st line..hot..2nd ...Not

Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
4/10....Didnt really work


Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D

7/10...Nice Similie and Meta

Had better punches...u won this battle by like 2 punches
u kinda fell off ya grind a lil..get back 2 the old Spul
Nice concepts here and metas which got u the win
work on ya structure and flow kid

60%

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Old 06-26-05, 05:51 PM   #27
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Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
na..doesnt hit
Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
seen this type of concept flipped so much =\
You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
eh, ok
Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
once again an eh, ok
Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
na wording sucked
Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D
i get it but still it isnt hard

vs.

Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
damn....nice witty punch
April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
na
1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
eh na
.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
decent i should have said i'd instead of i'll
if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
na
Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
alright personal..needs better wording

V/1ndeph

Sorry SPuL but you just slacked with a quickly keyed verse. He came well and had some witty shit in there. 1ndeph u got some great potential, jsut work on your wording of concepts better. Coo battle guys, but it showed who wanted the W more
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Old 06-26-05, 07:12 PM   #28
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ok, you both know I'm cool with both of you. So this is an honest vote. Lets see.

Deph:
Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way.
Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace.
good punch.... I liked it! 8/10
April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited...
I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute
not as good, but not that bad. 4/10
1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today.
all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes.
Jill lmao Spul be all like "....." prolly. 5/10
.....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take.
I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase
lmao dope......... 8/10
if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death
so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest.
haha nice........ 5/10
Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake.
But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case.
nice job.. good punch 5/10


Overall, you had good verse. deph. Nice flow and stuff. punches could have been harder tho. 35/60

spully:
Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best
walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf)
nice wordplay. 6/10
Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows
Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide...
.......................................... almost as wide as your nose
LMAO.......... omg....... lmao dope... 10/10
You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help
You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself
not bad ok....... 5/10
Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat
Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat
no played 3/10
Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear
you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas
damn, nice........... 7/10
Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please
Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D
nice word play.... 7/10


damn, you came hard man. Liked this verse. good flow and shit. real nice. Liked the nose punch the best. had me rolling ROFL.. good shit 38/60

both came hard. tight battle. But SPL came harder

v/SPuL


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Old 06-27-05, 11:43 AM   #29
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indeph took dis IMO...

spul-u know u my nigga but u didnt really transition ya punches good...u didnt really have any punches that stood out but u did have some creativity..da diarrhea how eva da fuck u spell it shit is like kinda played..

indeph-iight i liked yours more because it was more complex and had good personals and shit in there...but like the first u coulda re-worded sum of ur lines n da verse woulda stood out betta..

v/indeph good battle from both tho..

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