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Old 06-27-05, 07:37 PM   #1
MsBoOtYpHaT4U69
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Da Link

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Chorus
Manifest through the soul thought of instinct
rhymes dat I spit only made fa human link

High jack ya soul, just call me da 9-11 sniper
and lead the rightous to justice call me da pied piper
lyrical cypher....and the verbal assasin in the flesh
I step up to da mic and all i spit is my best
success....my rhymes are halitosis cuz i come up wit hot shit
defent, now yall niggas must be delirious
I can't even take ya challenge dat serious
come back wit ya flow in order
or come back wit a flow like water
pound fa pound, I'm da best heavy weight
gun on bate....see me in da streets keep it on da low
and watch me rise like yeast for da doe
in my eyes all you see is a beast wit da flow
you tryin to rhyme ya puttin up a great performance
so great you might win a oscar for it
but give it up cuz what you lack is da instinct
plus you to wack and not strong enough for human link

Manifest through the soul thought of instinct
rhymes dat I spit only made fa human link
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Old 06-27-05, 08:54 PM   #2
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Yo this was a good piece. it flowed well and the vocab was aiite.
but i've seen better from you before and i 've seen you lay out the structure better.
but it was a decent piece in its own right.
keep doin your thing....
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Old 06-27-05, 09:05 PM   #3
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Shit sounded mediocre...........but what was the topic?.....U just seemed to be masterbatin or sumtin when u made this.Cause you were hell-bent on makin urself look good.So is that wat this thing was about?....Urself?Because the title said "Da Link"watever the fuck that is.

And I still want a battle with you.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589
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OOh and yeah.........I still love you too Miss bootyphat.

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Old 07-02-05, 04:47 PM   #4
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damn ma u flowed very good on diz joint here i would luv 2 collab wit ya on a piece very soon but it was str8 fire, multi'z, metas, & overall is a 9/10 keep writing i c ya potential much luv 2 u
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