You think you saw-it all, but I got mad clothes up in my closet/
Cuz I got "wads" of cash like someone "jacked off" in my wallet/
I cant stand-fakes who claim to hold heat but then they hands-shake/
While J got more "fat stacks" than a plate of IHOP pan-cakes/
Hold-it-mayne, you cats might think you got skills but ya flow-is-lame/
With a bottle of "Jack", I "sip more JD" than the girls that blow-Jermaine/
I leave ya "Family Tied" up like that sitcom wit Michael J-Fox/
My drug dealin's like "David to Goliath", the way I "slang-rocks"/
To start-a-great rhyme, you need me, so stay apart-from-hate/
Just cuz Im holdin cash and yall stay broke like apartment-gates/
I make ya show-ya-shame-fam, while I own-my-bank-branch/
Cuz I "hold more green" in my hands than Notre-Dame-fans/
You bitches-weak, if I roll up and drive by in a tinted-Jeep/
Then watch ya back kid cuz i stay strapped like infant-seats/
You want-it-with-this? Ill run up and straight shove a gun-in-ya-ribs/
And fuck carrying heat, I got an oven on each one-of-my-hips/

up for some feed

ohhhhh shit! this woz killer man! i woz feelin this a lot!
Hold-it-mayne, you cats might think you got skills but ya flow-is-lame/
With a bottle of "Jack", I "sip more JD" than the girls that blow-Jermaine/
^^^^LOL nice
yo this woz jus straight hot. 9.5/10

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yo, rtf, if possible, on any of the battles in my sig. peace

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meh.. half of them aren't good

5/10

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^^ its not meant to be a punchline keystyle so rating the punchlines isnt really the right thing to do...i was just keyin and thats how it came out

Blah this was decent, but putting the "-" in between your words is not only annoying as fuck, but it's herbish. We dont need designs to see your flow. Other than that, this was a decent drop. Some of the lines were played, like the "stay strapped like infant seats" line. Didn't Game say pretty much the exact same thing?? Hmm

6/10

RTF on either "If I Die Tonite" or "Welcome To My Life"

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^ whatever dude, you can hate on me all you want....and I dont put the "-" marks to show the flow, its to point out the punches so simple minded people will understand them...every site I have ever been on has worked that way, where you put somethin around the punches...you dont like my style than dont leave feed...simple as that...and you want to talk about herbish? your last 2 wins have been from DQ's because 1 guy spit too many lines and the other the guy wasnt even on the site anymore....now thats herbish...fuckouttahere

^i feel you...let the guy decorate his drop if he wants too....a person on point, can look past it....

but, you had some good lines in here, mayne:

My drug dealin's like "David to Goliath", the way I "slang-rocks"/

Cuz I "hold more green" in my hands than Notre-Dame-fans/

-yeah, that led me to believe you serious on some real shit....probably got punches for days


aye im doing this collab...and you would be perfect....cuz you got some good shit keystyling...so, you probably raw...when ya think about it.....hit me if yu tryna get down....

return the favor?:....Birth of a Goddess.

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.Re-Writing The Re-Run.

Nice drop!
Wordplay was on point
Punches was coo
overall 6/10

^^ finally someone who's not caught up in hate...appreciate the feed

Verbal, thanks for feedin too homie

Im not hating on you for one kid, Im giving you my honest opinion. I dont care how many damn sites you've been to, decorating your drops is annoying and makes you look herbish in the eyes of others. And please know what your talking about before you try and talk about my battles, or anything else with me. You asked for honest feed, and if you can't accept it, or you think you're so much better than everyone that you think all you are going to get is herbish feed like "dope drop, go look at mine" then you need to stop dropping open mics.

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