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MiSk 5 100.00%
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Old 06-30-05, 02:40 PM   #1
MiSk
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From: North East
blazinballa421 vs MiSk

IP: 8B7B DE28

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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3-0 = KO

****If you don't want to battle just DECLINE****

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Check in by: 07-03-05 at 02:40 PM

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Win by 3-0 KO
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Old 06-30-05, 03:08 PM   #2
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blazinballa421 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 03:08 PM.
 
Old 06-30-05, 03:47 PM   #3
blazinballa421
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From: strong island
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yo im full of suspense .. MISK??.. u like a broken cash register u dont make sense ( cents ) // ur whole style is trash.. ur rhymes and toilet paper have one thing in common.. i use them ta wipe ma ass//1 wrong punch line and ill put the tecks ( text) to ya face// denslowly watch the smile erase//im runnin out of time ----- bitch ---- so i suggest u read between the lines// if life was a dice game ive been shootin head cracks since age nine// by the end of this i kno u prolly had - it - with - me// ma rhymes - so - sweet - they - give - u - a -cavity// half the shit i got...ull never be able to afford em // cause im always on the track like jeff gordon
 
Old 06-30-05, 04:15 PM   #4
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MiSk has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 04:15 PM.
 
Old 06-30-05, 04:38 PM   #5
blazinballa421
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From: strong island
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nigga hurry up.......................................
 
Old 06-30-05, 06:50 PM   #6
MiSk
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If ya want yur first win, u chose the wrong person to battle
'ridin' so many dicks.. u should change yur name to Blazin Saddles*1
Kids ashamed of his talent so he kicked his own ass to the curb
i saw a picture of you once in the dictionary... next to the word 'herb'
Droppin' shit thinkin' its hot... check the does on yur meds
them pills got ya all confused, yur punches go over ya own head*2
After this battle I'll leave ya frozen in time... outlined in chalk
give ya so many holes in yur body ya'll be whistlin' while u walk*3




*1- Blazin Saddles is a movie, you ride saddles
*2- 'go over yur head' is an expression that means = not understanding (so i'm trying to say that he doesnt understand his own punches)
*3- When air movies through small holes it makes a whistling sound
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Old 06-30-05, 09:07 PM   #7
MiSk
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bump bump bump.....................
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Old 07-01-05, 09:43 AM   #8
MiSk
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uppin for votes......................................
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Old 07-01-05, 09:45 AM   #9
Daubs
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This was feedback posted for MiSk

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EZ.......

In future dont go for the herbs, try to get a better rep :coo:
I know your capaple.
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Old 07-01-05, 03:34 PM   #10
MiSk
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uppin....... once again........................
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Old 07-01-05, 03:47 PM   #11
El Taco
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Voted For: MiSk

v/misk...easily...................................
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Old 07-01-05, 10:20 PM   #12
MiSk
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IP: C702 5F96

uppin.....................please vote..................
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Old 07-02-05, 01:58 AM   #13
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 6EB9 28C9

Voted For: MiSk

Blazinballa421

yo im full of suspense .. MISK??.. u like a broken cash register u dont make sense ( cents ) //
Cents/sense punches are played. You didn't do anything to flip the concept. This was just generic wackness. Make your set up relate to the punch too. You cant just rhyme "Im full of suspense" doesnt relate at all to broken cash registers.. 2/10
ur whole style is trash.. ur rhymes and toilet paper have one thing in common.. i use them ta wipe ma ass//
At least this time your set up related to the punch. However, this concept is also played out like no other.. 3/10
1 wrong punch line and ill put the tecks ( text) to ya face// den slowly watch the smile erase//
Wow. This was terrible. Why'd start your concept in your set up? That pretty much bombed this whole bar.. 3/10
im runnin out of time ----- bitch ---- so i suggest u read between the lines// if life was a dice game ive been shootin head cracks since age nine//
Man, you had 1 random ass multi in your set up. You didn't have a punch. Just random ass rambling.. terrible.. 1/10
by the end of this i kno u prolly had - it - with - me// ma rhymes - so - sweet - they - give - u - a -cavity//
Using those lines doesn't make this shit any better. Your set up was random as fuck. Where you were supposed to add in a punch you added in self glorification.. 0/10
half the shit i got...ull never be able to afford em // cause im always on the track like jeff gordon
Self glorification is wack in a battle. You attempted wordplay, but this was still bad.. 1/10

Overall - 10/60

MiSk
(Explaining punches is wack. Either word your shit to where you won't need to explain, or don't use the concept.)

If ya want yur first win, u chose the wrong person to battle
'ridin' so many dicks.. u should change yur name to Blazin Saddles
You should incorporated your set up to mention something about him being a dickrider. Your concept in the punch was played. It wasn't that good.. 2/10
Kids ashamed of his talent so he kicked his own ass to the curb
i saw a picture of you once in the dictionary... next to the word 'herb'
Your set up fit the context, however the concept was played. It didn't really connect that good.. 4/10
Droppin' shit thinkin' its hot... check the does on yur meds
them pills got ya all confused, yur punches go over ya own head
This was wack. Saying he doesn't understand his punches? Concept is weak. Set up didn't fit the context.. 1/10
After this battle I'll leave ya frozen in time... outlined in chalk
give ya so many holes in yur body ya'll be whistlin' while u walk
Your set up could have been used a punch. This would have connected harder if you switched these two lines around. The set up had a better concept then your punch did.. 4/10

Overall - 11/40

Vote - MiSk
 
Old 07-02-05, 01:00 PM   #14
MiSk
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From: North East
IP: C702 5F96

uppin............................................. .
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Old 07-02-05, 06:43 PM   #15
N.Tavarez
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From: East Coast
IP: C702 5F96

Voted For: MiSk

MiSk your verse was just decent, nothing special. punches were pretty good. Your flow to it was really good and the structure was really good. Could of been a little bit better but enough to get my vote

blazin first of all you have to work on your structure, the bars just ran into one another and ruined the whole flow to your verse. your punches werent as hard as MiSk. Have to give MiSk my vote
 
 


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