aight this is my verse for the tourney some punches thrown into this one... tried a few things different, no crazy overdubs this time lol... o n i replied to a bajillion tracks but ill name my 2, dzks track n acuitys hellbound track...

top track, vs soc

lyrics:
no STRINGS ATTATCHED i dont play with SOC PUPPETS/
im not bluffin FUCKIN HERBS ima leave this CROP DUSTED/
i shine hard behind bars ten times outta a dime/
mah lines PUNCH OUT like TIME CARDS/
ya ass'll be dealt with after battle you'll melt/
ill get MEDIVAL ON THAT ASS LIKE A CHASITY BELT/
pass me tha el ya similar ya ashin ya self/
actualy im HOLDIN FLAME like a BASKET IN HELL/
ill leave ya dome blasted im known to be savage/
heres a BRUSH WITH DEATH, ill putta COMB IN YA CASKET/
ill leave ya face rocked like stonehenge its ownage/
comin BIG OFF THA TOP just like A CONE HEAD/
ill check ya later, catch rec when i bless tha papar/
setcha remainders UNDA COVAZ like INVESTIGATAZ/
n bet, ill breath fire leave ya sector flamin/
heads are bangin the best of tha vets im rated/
debated as fresh to death, DRAW!/
ya FADIN when ya SHAKE like an ETCH A SKETCH
ill CUTCHA LUNGS OUTCHA CHEST, TOSS EM now CATCH YA BREATH/
fuck it ill leave ya set a mess/
best send em out a SOS ill letcha rest/
whats next, got n e questions? yes/
zip ya lips!, you dont needa askit/
ill LACE you widda STITCHEd TOUNGE like REEBOK CLASSIKS/

asap! ima put va on tha map/
but first, ima show yah how to take out tha trash/
fuck his name but we came to put this lame in a bag/
make sure to tie it tight theres no escapein he'll gag/
suffocatin a fag theres no mistakin it cat/
put em on tha curb! and ina day he'll be snagged/
by tha garbage man on tha day that he'll pass/
thru ya neighbor hood n take em on back...
hey! now maybe he'll stay away from tha track/
i said maybe in fact, but baby im back n IMONA ROLL/
BUTTER ME UP baby cuz im outta control/
ya WASHED UP n tha SHOWER IS COLD/
man ya kinda like a TOWEL YA FOLD!/
i SOLD POWDER N SNOW, so how do i know/
to get tha WHITE OUT on ya name now bow to my throne/
i, spit fire like bowser ya know im powerfull /
im tha one that made tha towers go over!/
cuz im fly like 747s bound to get blown/
bound to get blown , bound to get blown bound to GET BLOWN/
like snoop n ferrel, im loopey as hell tryna get a qp to sell/
dude, ya mic CHECK got LOSED in tha MAIL/
dude is just frail, im HOTTA THAN LUCIFERS CHAIR/
ill burn ya BOTTOM UP, n just to be fair/
ya facin a HEAVY WEIGHT im breathin JUPITERS AIR/
take a look in tha mirror, ya goofy is it news to ya ear?/
heres a noose tie it tight n jump loose in the air!/

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haha, this shit was aight here, punches were there, the flow was nice. you stayed
on beat, & even the beat was nice here, overall nice lil diss you got here though



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i was feeling ya flow mayne.....ya punches were onpoint.....ya delivery was kew.....yu did a good job mixin it so the effects didnt over do it....the switch up was hard....yu kinda sound like M&M.....hot drop mayne.....


return the Favor?...."Wordz"

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im tha one that made tha towers go over!/<---shows ya ignorence
best send em out a SOS ill letcha rest/
whats next, got n e questions? yes/<----lost ya flow there son
Overall decent i guess typical eminem flow tho not a real dawg from the hood would bump you based on voice tone sounding like 15 yr old hittin puberty probably why i see so many 15 yr olds like mikez flockin towards ya ass anywayz good luck wit it

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watch whos names you bring into net beef convo's

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niiice flow was on point, punches and wordplay were crazy! i liked it a lot, the second part wasn't as good as the first, flow was off at times. i didn't think you were arrogant or anything, i liked it. keep it up

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^i feel you on that second part, i think i mixed it off a lil and fucked up the accapellas quality a lil too...

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i aint involved in ur shit tonyslef n omen but 1 things 4sho omen dnt sound neting like eminem....

newayz omen i peeped dis yday jus 4got to type ma fbak....ITS DA RETURN OF DA MACK....WHOS BCK LIKE COOKED CRACK, ur back 2 ur dopeness, your EC diss was well -_- by ur standrads, dis sounds a lil crisper n nicer not being overdubbed all tha way through cuz, damn da punches r flyin off everywhere..i like to think of maself as clever n ting so im feelin ur more though about punches like the chastity belt and tha Jupiters air bar was so raw its wrong....almost defiently u ripped it and sounded a lot betta ova tha 2nd beat man...keep em comin, u gotta agd chance of takin gskillz from seven...

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i thought this was a decent battle track.. some parts i didnt like your flow.. others the flow worked.. so decent flow.. lyrics were good in part and in others you got really simple like you needed filler.. you need to make ya filler better flow wise and delivery.. the filler thats in this is like wtf happened ? lol.. not a diss.. its just when u go from punches to a really really really simple line, you throw off ya audience a bit.. "best send em out a SOS ill letcha rest/
whats next, got n e questions? yes/".. thats one of the parts where u get real simple.. id say jazz up ya filler and youd be a solid battler.. decent track tho.. i liked alot of the punches..


ps: im being hard on ya track because i see you at a different level than you are.. yah'mean ? i see you elevatin real fast.. so im tryna give u different feedback than just the normal "i love your shit" feedback.. aight keep droppin hot.. -1

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^yea i def respect that alot man, u ferreal one of the only cats i take seriously on this damn site... maybe ill look into this filler idea, cuz i dont edit my vocals, my boy duz it, so let me know a good filler type and settings so i can test it out... thanks alot tho

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i peeped this not bad only thin is you fall off alot.. you should try writin to the beat more then just tryna fit in a punch feel me man and ya shit would sound alot better but good drop none the less..1ne..

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i like the first verse some really sick multis nice flow you got some nice skills. oh the defeat line killed it c'mon man how many times you heard that flipped lol