this?
ayo...
u cant touch-me,i love to eat up mc's,n right now im hung-ry
ya lyrics suck,u got better chance to beat me if ya lyrics wer count-ry
im the one to elevate,u sit watch n hate,im the champ lik the pistons
u cant improve,its lik subtractin 0 cuz it aint gon make a difrence
im the lyrical mc wit the hottest nouns,the underground unherd sound
the one to knock you down,like balls wit a BLIND jugglin clown
dunt be mad cuz my raps get hits,back quick,wen they dunt like ya shit
ur a special child,one who wuld lose MUSICAL CHAIRS vs a DEAF KID
ha,i'll laugh if i see you on manstream,thas ur biggest dream
but thas never happenin like dead people wit GREAT hygene
im the hottest to be underground,i'll knock out this clown
cuz having a bohner in church is the only time u 'holdin it down'
i bet you aint no G,ur a computer nerd like anotha steve urkel
n u culdnt get a round of applause if i clapped in circles

this?

Bitch, You Couldn't Cum Fresh, If You Stored Ya Sperm In A "Zip-Lock"
DNA Could Have A Dragon'z Throat And He Still Wouldn't "Spit-Hot"
Kid You Just Shyt Outta Luck, Thinkin' That You Can "Defeat-Me"
I'd Cut Out Yah Vocal Cordz, Just So You Could "Speak-Free"

It'z Like I Got You Upside-Down, By Tha Way, You "Facin-Defeat"
You Could Have A Miami Jersey On And You Still Wouldn't "Throwback-Heat"
I'm Droppin' Strate Flamez And Ima Leave You Verbally "Scortched"
You Remind Of Midgetz On Bikez, Kuz Your Verse Iz "Riding-Short"

Kid, You Alwayz Missin' Yah Punch, So Ima Rename You, "Kool-Aidz-Wife"
I'll Rip Out Yah Heart, Touch It To Mah Cock, Even Tho U Have Enough "Dick-In-Yah-Life"
You Got No Flow, And All Of Yah Shyt "Just-Missed"
Just Forfiet, You Couldn't Win Thiz Shyt, Even If Thiz Battle "Waz-Fixed"

I Use Thiz Keyboard Az A Weapon, And Make You "Fold-In-Secondz"
Kid, Don't Eva "Swallow-Mah-Lyricz" Or You'll Be Murdered By "Ur-Own-Intensionz"
I Can Tell By Yah Flow, That You Came Wit Yah "Best-Wieght"
I Don't Know Where You Live, But Im Sure I Just Increased Tha "Death-Rate"


or this...
R.I.P Kid....

Convinced diets are bad, an eatin fat is nothin but good for yah health.
You'd even try "suckin ya own dick", an end up gettin a*head* of yaself..
You ain't got an ounce of respect, broken is nice? RV's doubtful yes.
An its easy to forget B like stoppin at A & sayin fuck the rest of the alphabet..
Yer flow is awful, an could truely Dizturb ppl every time.
Hittin on time, i heard 7's yah fav number?...Why? Cause 7-"Ate"-9..
Leavin yah speechless worse than a mute with no hands, this an easy win.
I'd offer to re-make you a sig, but just like your life, you'd never "fit in"..
Forever a fuckin misfit, but in this story only happy endings are allowed.
So i sent ya 2 the obesity ward... now u finally "blend in with the crowd"..

against diffrent ppl

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OYD MAFIA

not bad man not bad at all

They All Good Fam..................................
Glad Raw Got You First Homie.........u's Got Some Mad Skills Fa Sho.

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Met!culous

thanks but wot du ya think is betta???i mite jus keep tryin wid all of em

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OYD MAFIA

I liked the second one with the multi's...I think multi's are fucking SICK...it wasn't a bad verse either....the second one gets my vote

koo its 1-0-0 to the second one me tryin to figure out wot i shud use thnks for feed

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OYD MAFIA

I Agree The Second One Then........................

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Met!culous

koo2-0-0 aight cheers ppl!

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OYD MAFIA

Lol...wrong section?

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i'm bored.

i dunno wot to put it in then??

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OYD MAFIA

nah dont listen to him its koo in ere coz you a new member...but really it should be in lyricists lounge...
peace out fam................

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Met!culous

Now spit it into Audio and lemme hear it....

Go Audio

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iLL iNDiViDUAL SoundClick

mix it up....do em all at diff times

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and o yea...pistons arent the champs any more

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