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Old 07-03-05, 03:59 PM   #1
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Yeah.. freestyled.. not great but did it quick.. my voice sorta fades in and out at times because i kept moving my head wen i was freestyling lol.. but yeah.. the quality isnt so good either i guess cuz my freaken friend jacked up wen he was editing everything.. so along with other songs i recorded that day.. but yeah.. here it iz.. not so great but w/e..

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197923
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Old 07-03-05, 04:08 PM   #2
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Um.. bruh... you need 2 put your beat homie..
Lyrics.. is coo..
lol @ the beat in the background.. when this shit started playing I was like wtf.. I thought some1 connected with me to talk on aim..

Shit is coo.. but add a beat..

and um drop feedback..

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Old 07-03-05, 04:10 PM   #3
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ive been half xpectin u 2 drop some dope ass studio track wid all tha studio talk u been givin l8r but ok lets hear u free cuz,

beat is sick, wats ur AIM, i want it....we can collab 4 a track...neayz, i cnt hear shit ur vocals r soo low..damn when u gonna spit lol......ok cool, ur vocals r still too low, ur voice is cool,its not bad, wierd ass topic 2 free bout lol, but what u sayin is cool, nuttin lyrically amzing but decent

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Old 07-03-05, 04:17 PM   #4
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ive been half xpectin u 2 drop some dope ass studio track wid all tha studio talk u been givin l8r but ok lets hear u free cuz,

beat is sick, wats ur AIM, i want it....we can collab 4 a track...neayz, i cnt hear shit ur vocals r soo low..damn when u gonna spit lol......ok cool, ur vocals r still too low, ur voice is cool,its not bad, wierd ass topic 2 free bout lol, but what u sayin is cool, nuttin lyrically amzing but decent

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197837 RTF


yeah atleast its decent for a freestyle lol...
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^I didnt hear any beat
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Old 07-03-05, 04:18 PM   #6
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Um.. bruh... you need 2 put your beat homie..
Lyrics.. is coo..
lol @ the beat in the background.. when this shit started playing I was like wtf.. I thought some1 connected with me to talk on aim..

Shit is coo.. but add a beat..

and um drop feedback..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197995

huh????????????????? add a beat??????????????
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Old 07-03-05, 04:19 PM   #7
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I listened 2 it.. and I didnt hear any beat...
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Old 07-03-05, 04:22 PM   #8
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Nigga.. Im listening now again.. aint no beat.. the beat is in the background.
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Old 07-03-05, 04:25 PM   #9
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Nigga.. Im listening now again.. aint no beat.. the beat is in the background.

okay? lol..........
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Old 07-03-05, 04:32 PM   #10
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You start talking.. then like 1 min in the song.. you pause.. and start whispering.. and then.. you start spitting again.. Iono I hear no beat..
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You start talking.. then like 1 min in the song.. you pause.. and start whispering.. and then.. you start spitting again.. Iono I hear no beat..

man thats wierd lol..but yeah the engineering sucked in this shyt.. but w/e thanx for the feed
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i can tell u this....whoever produced this song needs alot more work wit that mixxin board...y is the beat panned to the right...and u need to pronounce ya words betta...alot of words in the second verse sound muffled...
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Old 07-03-05, 05:41 PM   #13
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i can tell u this....whoever produced this song needs alot more work wit that mixxin board...y is the beat panned to the right...and u need to pronounce ya words betta...alot of words in the second verse sound muffled...


lol yeah.. nah he's really good at mixing and shyt.. but he had hella shyt in his mind i guess.. he sed he'll let me re-record for free this friday and we'll do it good next time
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Old 07-05-05, 07:01 AM   #14
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interesting

the beat is almost elevator music-like

decent track

the vocals weren't blended into the beat well

ur flow was aiight on it


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Old 07-05-05, 03:07 PM   #15
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this was aight. i was feeling the beat and the lyrics were ok. but more conviction is def needed.
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