over Canibus's 4321 Beat


comprised of consumption.. my grind is and emulation
a mind of rhymes that have me in line for propulsion
spines are convulsing like a methodical seizer
heads follows my lead cuz im the prodigal teacher
particles of reefer – break it down im ready for rap
with versus like throwing up confetti with facts
enlightening showering… igniting empowerment
fully equipped give me a mic I’ll devour it
my advice, stay cowering...it aint worth your palace
that’s right you’re a big shooter like dirk in dallas
I wont hurt you fellas.. despite im down to win
If its about how thug lets pass the mic around the pen
Sun your kites powder thin..im dealing with clumps
And that’s the reason why I aint feeling you chumps
Go back to rap school, oh your wack aint that cool
This gansta shit is loosing its grip like Castro
No more hassles im past you on the inside
Heroic upset like the last few in the pinstripes
Smash you in the windpipe..your lost for words
And don’t even rebuttle it’ll will cost you herbs

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ya multis are sick


^love the flow in that....multis were onpoint


^yep, lets get this shit going...

nyce drop overall...onpoint with ya flow and multis...and yu had some slick lines in there....good to see ya here...bring the heat....

ps....where stoic go?

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uppin good looking

nice flow and structure was ok....metaphors were decent and multis were good...overall:good job 8/10

return the fav. link my sig

word good looking

trying to get some feed