Okay. This sucked. Really. No hate or beef, but this was pretty damn bad. At least it's a keystyle, but I'm not seeing any of your stuff.

Do you think we're not smart enough to realize when something rhymes? Don't use ~ or " " unless it's like wordplay.

Your vocabulary was way too basic. Your rhymes were so elementary I almost cried.

5/10

Find a better topic...elevate. No hate.