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stupid puss-c ass bitch dissin Kool, and now he gets his ass kicked in a battle against him lmao, fuck you puss-c

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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

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fuck dnt tell me u actually killed the kat..u fuck asss

but the vote goes to KoolC... had more personals and better metas...... better flow and harder vocab.... P.. you need to werk on ur punches .. need to make it more personal... good battle here....

fuck dnt kill the kat.. ?? did u /??

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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

Kool Col B
this kid iz wack az fuck, c, i got better raps
n yeah i hate puss-c... but i aint wearin leather chaps
Lol, filler in the first line.
ima put red dots on puss-c....
........ no, not a sexually transmitted disease
Lol, nice wordplay on his name.
werd....... i aim my scope on ya fitted n sqeeze
he'll b muthaphukkin fallin 2 tha ground, im serious
No.
puss-c gushin blood, n i aint talkin bout a period
he just prooves i dont need sex 2 have pussy on my dick, chea
LMAO. Good punch.
u say i d/r eazy? spucca please, click here
u betta do wut he sez, shut tha fuck up or else...
u screw pussy? yes? aight, then go fuck yourself
How did you find that link? Ok closer here.

Overall, too much gunplay. I know you said that, but I figured I would remind you. Work on more creative personals, cuz yours were starting to get old. Poor pussy.

I-Cunt-Troll
Kool's records like asses made a rocks,he can't spank it
&It notmy fault,he stay on top guys,like he was a blank-it
Ok punch. Wording could have been better.
Ur songs lie like sayin ya had tits on you,we all know it's not true
Closest you eva get to complements is when someone diss-like you
No. Bad punch and fake personal.
He's a dead lion,there's no more gore,we don't hear his roar
Like veteran carpentars,Kool's rhymes leave us board/bored
Bad similies.
He's gay,I'ma man,yet I got this bitch in front me on his knees
Kool could fuck Gandi,yet his shit would neva be a master-peace
Gay punch filler. Fake personal, wordplay was ok.
Talkin shit in LL,like ya gonna throw me over your head
Only thing Kools holds above ya shoulders is his legs
Gay punch again.

Overall, the potential is there, but your wording and similies ruin what could be a good verse. Try better personals and more wordplay. Though your master peace wordplay was decent.

My vote goes to kool col B for punches and personals. Both need to work on wordplay.

v- Kool Col B

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Yep well structure on the personals of punchlines was better in the areas of disses and pictures.....n shit

v/that guy
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