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07-15-05, 12:58 AM | #1 | ||||
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"3 Months and Runnin"
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[Hook]
I'm runnin.......... I'm runnin...............I'm runnin.............oh lord I'm runnin [Verse1] April 1st, 2005 I was still a child. Till I heard I faced 5months up in Juvenile. So I had to cop a plea 2months say I'm guilty. On the block I'm a vet but in a cell I'm a rookie. Judge told a nigga 2months then try for parole. Seen my moms walkin out shedding tears runny nose. Walk up to her told her like Tony Green will alright. You just gotta make it on your own ma live your life. Tell my bigger nigga give you money when the rent do. Yell Trigga Town tell'em Tony Green sent you. Cop snatch me up told me son its time to go. Reached out hugged my moms told her she gone make it thou. I walk thru some doors lawyer tell me just stay strong. Report it to the guard if a nigga try to do you wrong. Gave me my county orange told me exit out this door. For the next 2months I was in for a show. (Thats why I'm) [Hook] Runnin.......... Gotta Get out these city streets. Oh no I'm runnin......... county orange aint the color for me. Oh I'm runnin............ To a place I can call my home. Oh lord I'm runnin.......... Why the streets want leave me alone Oh I'm runnin! [Verse2] Seen my nigga Shackey thou, on the block he hoe. Walk up in the cell he runnin shit, claimimg foe. Told me like Tony Green don't worry bout anything. Lords caught him in the hall made a very bloody scene. Then they started to look at me,sayin he be with me. Told his mans thats Tony Green he a hoe gone had and swing. Sent his mans pretty bad you know me don't fight fair. The minute that he walked over I hit his mans with a chair. The other nigga came with a knife and tried to shank me. Don't try to fight dirty if you aint Tony Green. I walked out the penitentary July 10th. The inside of them doors I swore to never see again. I make it home that day,to see momma's okay. Got some of my friends over done made me a hot plate. But the, streets is me and I'm the streets. But I will never see the inside of the penitentary.(Cause I'm) [Hook] Runnin.......... Gotta Get out these city streets. Oh no I'm runnin......... county orange aint the color for me. Oh I'm runnin............ To a place I can call my home. Oh lord I'm runnin.......... Why the streets want leave me alone Oh I'm runnin! |
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07-15-05, 01:25 AM | #2 | ||||
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Drop a link or this will be closed
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07-15-05, 11:14 AM | #4 | ||||
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Thanxx and uppin, Bone don't close bout to go get a link!
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07-15-05, 11:16 AM | #5 | |||
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good drop hommie....structure wasnt that good....it flow well
...vocabulary was nicely used here...imagery of this concept was ok....overall this was a good drop..keep em comin TG overall-7.9/10 RTF on my OM feat. sabotage |
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07-15-05, 11:18 AM | #6 | ||||
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Thanxx and returnin the favor now!
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07-15-05, 11:29 AM | #7 | ||||
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07-15-05, 01:06 PM | #8 | ||||
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sick drop nigga....im feelin this...9/10...holla at my one "thug nigga"...its sumwere here lol
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07-15-05, 03:31 PM | #9 | ||||||||
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Much improvement since last time I checked one of your open mics... overly I'm very impressed...
7.5/10 rtf on Zig's last OM http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199925
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07-15-05, 03:33 PM | #10 | ||||
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Uppin to the top niggaz quit sleepin!
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07-15-05, 05:44 PM | #11 | ||||
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this was one of your better open mics, i liked the hook its simple but kiinda catchy ya feel me? also you had a decent flow and some good imagery to suit the topic. some bars were kinda too simple tho. maybe switch up the rhyme scheme to give ya om a lil flava. overall i give it a 8.5/10 holla at me and return the favor
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07-15-05, 07:42 PM | #12 | ||||
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Thanxx and uppin somebody nominate this for OM of the month!
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07-15-05, 09:34 PM | #13 | ||||
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Uppin foe more feed!
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