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Old 07-15-05, 09:09 PM   #1
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/l...oncan_music.htm

First track in months...Literally...

Leave feed, and I will return the favor...

I will get my links right now...
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Old 07-15-05, 09:23 PM   #2
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Old 07-16-05, 06:28 AM   #3
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listenin
intro's long
quality's ok
lyrics are ok
flow on and off at points....mostl gud
delivery cud use a lil more work
but nice drop
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Old 07-16-05, 11:59 AM   #4
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you should re-record this again, I like it, but it needs polishing. I like the bridge/hook- i like the feeling you put across, sounded like you meant it - just some spots where the flow/quality gets a little fuzzy. 1
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Old 07-17-05, 02:56 PM   #5
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Yeah the beat came a little fucked up...it like cracks and pops...it's not my fault, it's just the beat...

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Old 07-17-05, 03:02 PM   #6
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listening.. really luvin the beat..

the flow is pretty good.. lyrics are good man.. hmm should sorta up ur vocal volume up a lil jst a lil.. or i may be wrong.. iono im filipino lol.. delivery is okay..

chorus: chorus is nice... but sorta sounds like its jst part of the verse u know?? but pretty good..

verse: yeah same as other verse..

Chorus: nice once again..

7/10..

overall: not your best. i've heard alot better from you btu this is still higher than average.. g'd job lol
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Old 07-17-05, 03:08 PM   #7
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Yeah.....I gotta agree with seven three......rerecord this and it would probably sound dope. I think it's just lacking a little quality. The change in the beat for the chorus is gay. It kinda ruins the beat. If there is anyway you can adjust the volume of the piano, lower it and it would sound ten times better. Second verse sounds a little better than the first. Keep dropping ™
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Old 07-17-05, 03:53 PM   #8
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yo the beat is ill as shit, and I like ya slow flow on the beat, it really go with the beat. You remind me of Eminem a lil, not lyrical wise, but just the beat and how you came on it. The quality is not the best but its iight. I think that you couldve done better on the lyrics, but you did have good emotion.

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Old 07-17-05, 04:04 PM   #9
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yo the beat is ill as shit, and I like ya slow flow on the beat, it really go with the beat. You remind me of Eminem a lil, not lyrical wise, but just the beat and how you came on it. The quality is not the best but its iight. I think that you couldve done better on the lyrics, but you did have good emotion.

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Gawd damn...your like the fourth person in like three days that has said I remind them of Eminem...must mean somethin', no ?


Haha..Yeah thanks for the feed, I'll return the favor right now...
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Old 07-19-05, 12:19 PM   #10
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aight peeping............. message comes across strong...... like the flow...... delivery all that...... you rode the beat perfectly...... slow and on point........ energy level is on point...... im not one to talk when it comes to sound quality..... cuz i got issues wit that myself..... but i thought it was pretty damn solid homie.......

keep droping


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Old 07-20-05, 05:00 PM   #11
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A'ight...appreciate the feed...

Uppin'...
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Old 07-20-05, 05:07 PM   #12
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i agree with 7third ..this will be hot after you re-record it..
ya emotion an flow is pretty good..it just gets shaky at times..other than that..ill track homie..i fucks with this,,,..

7/10
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Old 07-20-05, 11:42 PM   #13
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alright flow was for the most part good off in a few places buteveryones is major improvement from ur last song lyrics were pretty good quality sucks but oh well were on the internet id say 7/10
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Old 07-21-05, 01:33 AM   #14
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Damn L.E this was pretty tight nice dope beat..your flow was good..your delivery could have been better..you had a nice chorus/bridge..you lyrics were good and onpoint..Overall good drop keep it up
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