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07-20-05, 05:02 PM
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CAN SEE ME NOW...full version..
IP: 63D7 7301
http://www.soundclick.com/lhm
some shit from my upcoming mixtape...
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07-20-05, 05:08 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 63D7 7301
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200845
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200204
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07-20-05, 06:19 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 8652 5EF1
better than the 1st version, definetly = )...no complaints here kyd, keep it up G
 ...werd @ "a big FUCK you to all tha dudes that said I'd never make it in rap"...
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07-20-05, 07:49 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: B276 73B7
Pretty good track, but heres what you could work on..........
The Chorus - it would sound better if the echo wasn't on your voice, and it sounds more like your spitting farther away from the mic, instead of enhancing the meaning of your words. Cause its hard to tell what your saying......The timing of "if you can see me now" was a little off on the chorus, and at the very very end. Verses - The story that you told was very well thoughout, and very percise. The book smart line was my favorite line. To improve, there were many lines that seemed that you tried to stretch the beginning of to keep your flow. Instead of that, add another word if you feel that your stretching, it keeps your flow consistant. Quality - Really good, except for the parts that i pointed out before....Keep up the good work man, just work on it..... 7.5/10
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07-22-05, 03:36 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 63D7 7301
Raising Like Yeast...stop Sleeping
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07-23-05, 06:25 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: BA9B F610
peeping..
beats not my type of styze you got presence, just need to really work on quality flows alright, its safe, not taking too many chances lyrics are alright, chorus needs to be redone fo real, take that echo shit off this is far from mixtape ready with the quality its at right now but on the bottom this a straight track, cant knock good stuff |
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