its aiite but i mean its stretched lines galore...

Wise Migrated from Competitive Boards .. your from newbie ones and thats where your Lyrics are Brewed..
Death is What You'll Recieve..But Wise'll stab you with "screwdrivers on your way to heaven" jus to make sure your "Spirit is Screwed!!".

i mean WTF if dem lines went ne lonvger.... id be able to put trains on em to travel from mexico to canada..... ya lines are nice ya multies arent workin dat well but dey aite..... just keep ur lines short and strate to da point only prob is ur wordin basically... dat spirit line i could make it half da length and more effective and still makin it obvious wat ur tryna say

well we came from different boards .. and different boards got different styles .. i mean honestly , you haven't seen long lines .. my style / structure isnt the basic one , ill admit that ..if i had to write an audio verse , then yes i will structure them with the basic format ..but this is text and i think text is alot different from writing an audio verse ... but hey , i appreciate your feedback and respect your opinions .. just respect mine .

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And thats word, if you remain loyal and active ima let you in, need a final yes.

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^^ oh thats mos def .. aslong as the crew members are koo with me rollin with chyall . den yah ima stay loyal mos def ..

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Ite welcom fam, post in the forum a lot too and rep us in your sig

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welcome... im an audio MC so i cant stand da stretched structure... but way i see it is... if u vgonna write text u will eventually do audio so write on a more audio friendly structure dat way its easier to in-corporate ur style into audio... but yea IMHO dat holla front style structure e.t.c is lame but it seems too many kids use it now... id prefer to battle on rm were u can see da lyrics fittin to a beat and they understand wat line breaks and so on are

^^ word i feel yah fam .. i do audios with my crew in real life .. we dont really get into professional studios but we do have a decent equipments .. so i definitely know where your comin from when it comes down to thhe whole stretched line thang .. i feel yah .


and das this mean im in LL now right ?

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Yeah you in man, rep us in your sig, i added you to the roster.

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^^ aight no doubt ..


sumbody hit up me up for a text collab .

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that verse was stretched to fuck...............

hello all my UK headz......................

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He can elevate,

hello solo

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