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07-21-05, 09:24 PM | #1 | ||||
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Never Cheat - feat. Jae, Deadly, and Enygma
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Finally! Me and Deadly Visions on another track together.....lol.
He hit me up with this collab and I'm thankful cause I think it's pretty dope ™ First: Jae Cyph Second: Deadly Visions AKA Key Rogue Third: Enygma Never Cheat Replied to.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200497 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200371
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07-21-05, 11:56 PM | #2 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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Man, that beat is too sicking...................who made it?
but let me break it down for ya jae - Flow is pretty good, but it seemed that you were sayin a couple of lines for fillers like "it came be much", you said that 3 times, and the trust me lines key - Flow, also pretty good, laid back style, emotion lacked, but had meaning in your sentences.... Enygma - Your flow is more agressive than the others, since they were more laid back, but it gave it a good transition Overall, decent track 8.2/10 Yo, if you decide to get on a remix on this Enygma, holla at me
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07-22-05, 12:47 AM | #3 | |||||||
tha illest
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aight ima give this a listen... laid back beat im expecting slow flows...
1st dude comes in real calm but still with emotion pretty cool flow n lyrics, not n e thing too complex just sumn to vibe to, i could chill to this.... lol at the end with tha lisp on twust me u sound homosexual tho dv comes in pretty nyce flow goes jumpy n rushed on some parts, lyrics are aight, alot of punch ins tho... e comes in cool lol, sounds like a chorus, damn this is tha best flow from e ive ever heard, damn usualy ur just spittin fast n loosin ya place but u r on point the whole time, hahaha damn still multis everywhere tho man, this is tha best verse on here i'd say, good ass flow man, this gets ur stripes from me... lol at the last line too... alltogether this was nyce, e came nycestt i think.. |
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07-22-05, 03:44 AM | #4 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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OOh finally u done..lol
Up on this
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07-22-05, 09:20 AM | #5 | |||
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jae cyph has pretty decent quality...but something about ur vocals had a "tunnel" sound at the start...corrected itself...ur flow is decent...I'm curious as to if you can flow faster or with more complexity
DV...hold your rhyming words out a little longer to smooth out your flow...ur quality was pretty good Enygma...I'd love to hear your vocals crisper and clearer...more vocal presence through better mixing/quality I like ur flow on here wasn't sure of the topic during this track...but it sounded good solid drop 1 |
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07-22-05, 10:00 AM | #6 | |||||||
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iight im listenin...beat sounds smooth..
1st cat..starts off smooth..nice simple flow...but for some reason...havin no adlibs take away quality if you had adlibs i think it'll sound nice..you should try that but you was good homie.. 2nd cat...he nice just sounds alil too mad for this beat..lol just kiddin be thats ya voice but you flowin real nice..wit the snares and kicks of the beats homie..so far yall all doin good... 3rd cat..ya intro sounded alil weak...but you spittin nice man..you see now you did adlibs..it sounds good..yall should try addin adlibs to the first cats verse...but this is a good track..though im not a fan of the lovely dub dub shit but yall pulled it off nice track i'll give this a 7/10 cuz theres alil things yall could work on to make it sound alot better but its still good na'mean well im out 1ne..
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07-22-05, 10:38 AM | #7 | ||||||
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listenin beats nice
jae.......nice start 2 the track...dont change ur style for no one .....if it work for u do u keys ....flow on ......nice lyrics as always....quality ok Enygma .....flows on ...lyrics ok solid drop |
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07-22-05, 05:43 PM | #8 | ||||
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Uppin ™
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07-23-05, 10:05 PM | #9 | ||||||
Flyweight
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Sense..lol i was not mad..lmao
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07-26-05, 10:02 PM | #10 | ||||
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uppin..........................
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07-26-05, 10:35 PM | #11 | |||||||
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yall def picked a ill beat..its a nice loop.........Jae....his flow is real simplistic....terrible rhyme scheme....lyrics is simple an to the point but seeme dlike he ran out of lyrics at end....DV....yea you alot calmer than u usually are...but u still seem outta place....ya rushing ya flow noticeably....lyrics was koo.......eng.....whoa eygn not flowing super speedy? I never thought I'd hear the day.....yea u fit the best out of all but lyrics...were disappointing....overall...the theme was proving ya faithfulness but yall was no where near creative enuff wit the topic to really make this a standout track...but it was still good you all added ya own unique flava too it...so stay up yall.......1
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