your not black
you cant rap
thats a fact
okay jack
your soo wack
u cant reply ^ to dat

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Boooo......Why bother?


I'll piss on you,Like that dave chapelle skit!
Hah!Sike....If im right you might like that R. Kell-shit!
Push me!...or write sumthan that wont put me 2 sleep!
I guess thought provoking sex..Is the only way this Pussy is Deep!
Your rhymes add up like Arithmatic....simple an basic.
An I seen your battles,Not intrested...they resemble lil kim's Face lift!


*Disgusted*...Why he wrote that shit?

So What...NEXT!

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damn kid you need to go to school
shit its 6 line min..cant you read the rules
my bad shit i didnt know see
fuck readin the rules you cant even read
your a rich kid whos into guys
shit ya so rich ya music neva plays in lo-fi

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man go ahead and get the fuck out tha game
every thing ya ever spitt was fuckin lame
man how the fuck u gona say this guys a kid
he spent more time on the steets than u eva did
you know what i bet u still live wit ya mommy
no job ya just spend tha day dreamin bout a guy name tommy
you know what go ahead and say my rhyme is crap
but fo sure its and upgrade from that fuckin sap^


i know it sucks w/e

Yep!,It sucks...sorta like your momma does.(Hah!)
Fuckin wit me will havin you see'n BLOOD...."Want sum drama CUZ!?!".
That aint a Line...More like ah Invite!
Cuz I think even if you were stuck in a computer....................You still wouldnt have In-cite!(In site!)
Okay tony,You fake phony,compared ta me nobodies closah!
You MONTANNA eh?....Then I'll bring ur career ta end like I was Sosa!


2 E-Z RIIIIIIIIIIIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiigggGGGGhhhhHHHHHHTTTTTT!!!

man what the fuck your from memphis
wouldn't u be better off in the countrey bussiness
do me a favor say hi to Tim Mcgraw
and ur steel cant even compare to what i draw
i got aks in the closet fully loaded
and what u know bout scarface i bet uve never seen coke much less sold it
.........
i know last lines a lil long but i had to say it

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"ID RATHA DIE LIKE A MAN THEN LIVE LIKE A COWARD"
- 2pac

"I don't know you,
But I know a man becomes a man from all the shit he goes through"
-Jadakiss

"No one can confidently say that he will still be living tomorrow."
-Euripides

"I know you've come to kill me. Shoot, coward, you're only going to kill a man."
-Ernesto Che Guevara (just before he was shot and murdered)

ColdSTEEL has got no appeal, his prose it just blows
like handkerchiefs, lesbian quiefs, and Scarfaces Nose!
Your lack of ability is a truth held self evident
You got no agility, the lack of quickness is previlent
Dont get me wrong CS - Coz yo I dont really know you
But keep dropping dribble like that - and Opposed 1 will "dro" you
What's "dro you" you ask? It meanz I'll chop up ya lines
To match every line I leave - you gotta post three times
I invite you to come back at me with your hardest of quills
But dont even bother posting less your displaying the skillz

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what R U?........ sum sorta cat thats beyond bitter!
2 diss's..."3's company".... an all I get is tha gay black John Ritter.
That wasnt even a punch line..more like Advice.
Wanna Battle?.....This aint beef,Im just throwin RICE!
Lets take it ta tha front lines,Let me know if you 4-real!
My name stays in ur mouth...YOu prolly bite! so you can get a Cold~SteaL(SteeL)

Dont Make This Serious,BOI


and dude below Opposed1...."I told you a long time ago...Not to Fuck wit Me!!!,You lil fuckin Monkey!"

Lol....juss havin fun wit it,Get At Me!

yea sure ima get at you
sorry boo...but its the sad truth
that it had to be ur mouth in which i blew
u be wrigglin lyk a trout while i screw you
how can i make this not too serious....
u say ur cold steel but infact ur a silly wuss

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influenced by crymz
addicted to rhymz

^^yo written these 12 lines will be a waste of my time
cause da nigga above me doesn't know how to rhyme
nigga u couldn't beat barney in a freesyle don't try me
i'll be walking around at night just to haunt ur dreams
go buy all the jewlery u can so u can just try to shine
if u come across me then ur jewlery will become mine
just hurry up mothafucka cause ur time is very short
because i'm comin to end ur carrer without any effort
i rhyme like 50 cent i might hurt ur feelins jus a lil bit
get over it pussy da nigga above me is a str8 bitch
and my raps are deadly they are str8 lyrically killen
my raps make spiky curl up and start to catch feelins

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VOTE ON THESE

wat nobody wanna diss me

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VOTE ON THESE

one line is all that i need to finish this bitch off
comparin himself to 50...just makes me laugh
hes been typin those 12 lines with tha same hands
that been night walkin on the bulge in my pants
i knew my dick was too big 4 his throat...
but he was the only "bottom" cheap enough when i was broke

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influenced by crymz
addicted to rhymz

Okay!,This actor is wack let me make this fuckin quick.
If you aint gay,Then why would you like a man suckin dick?
Dont answer that......Please! at least for my sake!
An 6 lines is 2 much just ta diss-mantle any 1 of these Fly-weights.
So next time you drop a line make sure it sounds good!
And sayin you~ influenced by crymz~Dont make you sound Hood.


Spiky?......Hah!

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ColdSteeL.......Alias Name

TheCritic?, Who the Fuck are ya nigga,
Dont Know?, RapVerse is for murderous killas,
Who are you to say if his lines is wack or hot,
Look at your's cuz muthafucka they not,
Ya like that Jewish kid on mtv that wanted to rap,
Fell down cuz you been lyrically capped,
By a muthafucka with killa skills, Ready to spill,
Ya brains out, Knock ya face out,
Wouldn't sell a record if one ever came out,