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07-24-05, 03:18 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Formation vs [Font]
IP: 2029 97B3
Topic:Questioning my Existence 30 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No Dickriding 500 Post To Vote Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 07-24-05 at 03:48 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. Win by banning |
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07-24-05, 03:18 AM
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IP: CF4E 8780
[Font] has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-24-05 03:18 AM.
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07-24-05, 03:24 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
Formation has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-24-05 03:24 AM.
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07-24-05, 03:48 AM
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IP: CF4E 8780
questioning my existence... i played off of it and decided to answer it as well "from the womb to the tomb questions of whom gave me life being sick and being right all enhanced by a personal strife the question of my existence came to me all in one night" wit a flip of her hair she made her way down the stairs today was the day and no she wasn't one to be scared there was something on her heart and she just didn't know so she took her coffee cup and made her way to the patio she sat down and began to etch.. write a letter trying her best "to this baby i hold in my stomach beneath my summer dress" i write to you now, to answer the question from a timed distance you will have your fathers persistence and probably my resistance for real but the substance that led to your overall existence the truth is and was that of a bottle of jack and my female essence but it was more than that for you were conceived not for you but for me because by this letter you know i wanted someone to love and agree with .. by the first kiss i laid upon your forehead all i could see was perfection and a reflection of what i wanted in me...crazy i sit back stopping the letter from the information it holds reading this now . falling back on her death she wasn't that old questions of my existence still persist from that day for-ward and it wasn't the question of me it was what i daily adored a mothers love which was all held together by a powercord she was young and still was victim to a mid age stroke so my question of existence was answered early just to even the score i don't believe is god no more than i believe in the hell beneath the sod crazy how life works its ways with out ever letting anyone on a sole ship taken from my existence that i persisted to know was more than what i could handle .. overall it helped me grow i know i could go on by the question simply can't be answered question to my existence? i'll tell you when they find a cure for cancer
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07-24-05, 04:16 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Dear God, My Demise Is Lost, God Why Was I Put Upon This Planet? Was I Placed Upon A Passage,The Task I Can Not Manage Obsession With Questions, Thoughts Rest On My Conscious He Never Answers, I Try Hard For A Response It's Non Sense These Factors Still Extricate, What's Left Will Only Again Fall Am I Existing?, Or Is This Pattern Fake, Will It Soon End All? No Sign Of Answers My Faith In Him And Myself Is In Denial I'd Cross The Nile To Know Hell I'd Even Walk Thousand Miles I Never Struggled To Get Some Answers, Not Even As A Child Sometimes I Glance Away And Think, This Is Not A Fair Trial I Know I've Made A Few Mistakes Even Committed Some Sins But I Was Believed To Be Deceived When I Found No One Wins Is It Just Me Or Is It I'm Left To Be Alone, With Out Gods Help I'm Getting Hit By Lighting Rods, If You Respond Rods Will Melt All I Ever Asked Was For Your Support In Answering Questions Cause My Environment Evolves, Around My Fancy Obsessions Never Had To Ask These Questions My Rents Where Corrective I Demand Response In My Hand At Once If It's My Last Objective I'm Still Standing Alone, But My Legs Still Walking The Distance I've Gotten No Where Just Writing, I Guess It's Fuck My Existence Sincerely, The One Questioning His Existence |
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07-24-05, 04:42 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Bumping This Piece........................................
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07-24-05, 05:59 PM
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IP: 2372 BC06
Voted For: Formation
font: you had some cool shit here man but the topic you wrote on wasn't creative enough lacked using the topic really you just talked about a girl basically not good enough here. the emotion eh not cool man but if the topic was something else it would of bin good and shit but naw man you should of came on something different formation: nice going stuck to the topic through the whole verse that was good i liked the emotion in here vocabulary very good structure was good not as good as your normal but it was. good i liked your wording in here you did it very well man thas why i think you got this battle....
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07-24-05, 06:06 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Dope THanks Fool Muahahha....................................
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07-25-05, 07:50 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
Bumping This Piece Muahahahaha.....................
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07-26-05, 04:40 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
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