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The Waters Reflections
IP: 28AD 5545
The Waters Reflections In These Waters I Think I See Another Dead Nigga Lookin At me Maybe In These Waters I See A Life That Useless From Weed In These Waters Lies A Poor Reflection Of a Man Thats Tired of 5-0 Detections In These Waters Lies Just Another Face Of a Man Thats Lost In Life and in Place In The Waters Reflection My Troubles Rest or shall I say my Worries At There Best Worries of Dying from a Bullet To The Chest Livin Life In The Present Full Of Regrets In These Waters I Know That I Saw a Young Man Thats Runnin From The Law In These Waters Lie The pain And tears But In The Waters I Wish to See....A Young Man who Lives Who he Is Any Feed Dropped will Be Returned In Any Way Possible ![]() |
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IP: 28AD 5545
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: C5B4 61C1
Damn Stanza didn't know you could get that deep it was hot liked the structure vocab was tight this was hot 8.5/10
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IP: 28AD 5545
LOl Yeah man I Like doin This
thanx Still uppin for feed |
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IP: 3240 794D
Thanx Man .....................Still Uppin
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Light Weight
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IP: D681 2E32
i felt this was a deep drop lots n lots of imagery
gooshit!!
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 419B 7A88
this was good, really felt it, but it sounded more like a poem to me, but thats just me, overall good read, keep it up
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![]() i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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IP: 3240 794D
Thank you All for the feed Lets keep it goin ..........
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B.I.G.
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IP: DD02 1081
Damn, thats mo like a poem lol, nice work... liked the emotions
a classic one... lol "A Life That Useless From Weed" haha... nice
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
It was decent...
Vocab lacked, emotion was there, but you could've put a little more into it. It just wasn't as deep as I was expecting it to be. Imagery, however, was pretty good, so props on that. Overall, a solid piece RTF and hit up the link in my sig
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
yeah, nice concept, emotion was there, the imagery was hot. nice drop!
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