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07-26-05, 06:24 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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Formation:A Walk In My Shoes
IP: 2029 97B3
Link Number One Link Number Two Come And Walk With Me, I'll Show You How Life Is I Bin There Done That Hustled More Then Twice Kid It's A Nice Fib.....To Say You Bin In My Shoes When Your Clues Tend To Break When You Let Rules Bend So I'm Telling You My Life And How The Pain Started When My Dad Wasn't There I Was Left Slain Hearted Never Get A Break,Cause I'm Awake Till The Morning Paranoid....So You Know My Head Feel The Warning In My Early Childhood I Was Raised To Think, Sin No Now I Can't Get Any Sleep... Till My Brain Drinks Info I've Came Up A Long Way And I'm Only Spitting Facts My Mind Tends To Stop...So I Think Of Quitting Rap I'm Careful Please Forgive Me For Taking No Chances I Prayed A Thousand Times, I'm Waiting On Answers My Thoughts Break Of Coarse The Seats Wetting Over Self Conscious On The Mic So The Beats Getting Colder I'm Humble On The Mic They Say I Tend To Act Rough An I Might Not Show Out But On The Low I Rap Tough Never Asked Dumb Questions Like Where My Dad Was Cause The Fact Was Till Now I Never Even Had A Buzz I'm Underrated....Though It Might Not Seem It At First Good Things Turn Bad So I Got To Dream Of The Worst I Know I Got Talent So Why Am I Sweating The Facts But Let Me Tell You My Life I Was Just Getting To That Moms Say I Got A Big Heart, So I'm Sending That Back But I'd Take My Shirt Of For You And Lend You My Hat I'm Breaking Down In Sweat Dawg But My Tears On Ice And I Won't Stop...Till I Succeed All Of My Fears In Life I'm Bout Tired Of This I'll Flip I'm Not Talking Front Back I Don't Ask For Much...I Even Question Do I Want Rap I've Sinned To Much It'll Be Hard God Please Forgive Me And I Try Hard Not To Dawg But I Release More Sins See Even Though I've Got Skill... I Feel That I Sound Whack I Want To Quit But I Can't Do It Till I Really Found Rap "Go Home You Can't Rap" That Shits All I Tend To Get So Every Time I Got A Chance I End Up Calling It Quits Though We All Make Mistakes I Feel I'm Making It Worst Haven't Battled In Years So You Know I'm Aching In Thirst My Guts Folding In Dawg But You Know I Came To Win Split Personality.....So Every Time I End Up Blaming Him And My Hearts In Pain So You Know I Struggle For Help I Try To Fix A Mess Dawg.. But Tend To Trouble My Self I'm Not Confusing Life.......But It Could Be A Lot Like Rap And I know The Ratio's Is Different So It's Not Like That I'm Up Till The Sun Shines......Just Writing New Tracks My Girl I Got To Work And I'm Like Right I Knew That Take A Shower Leave To Watch The Snow Clouds Melt To Work With A Frown I Hate The Go In Crowd Smell I Survive The Rap Ride....Just To Hold On Another Day I'd Throw Away To Have My Sisters And Brother Stay And When It's All Said And Done, Rap Is Just A Games Dude's Will Doubt Me.....And Say Kid Your Just A Lame The Cups Half Empty And Dawg It's Not Positive Pride Man Life's A Struggle So You Know It's Hard To Survive My Parents Left Dawg I'm On My Own I Live With Out Em If They Ever Came Around Me I Know Why Bit I Doubt Em And I'm Stating The True Facts Dawg Believe Me Or Not When The Tables Turn You'll Be The On Eating Your Rot I Know That You Hear Me, I'm Just Trying To Get Feed And Let You See...... My Life Story Views If You Let Me Thanks For Walking In My Shoes |
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07-26-05, 06:13 PM
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New to RV
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IP: B25F 477A
Oh . It sucked .
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07-27-05, 12:05 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: AAA7 A869
well i don't think it sucked, but it could have been better, was expectin more, couldn't really find a flow for it sounded a lil more like a poem, vocab, imagery, and emotion were good though, keep it up man
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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07-28-05, 07:51 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 3240 794D
Yo man i know how it is man.........I was really feeling it.......to me it sounds like one of dem tracts u aint tryin to be lyrical on and just throwin out dem facts and how u feel dawg......i know how it is to be hated and havin niggas sayin u cant rap and shit main.....dont let nobody tell you what you can or cant do cuz most of the time they hatin on they skills and if they can rap and shit they just hatin cuz they dont have the deep experiences u have that niggas can relate to...........So homie bottem line the drop was hot and i give it a 9/10
Keep it bangin
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 Project List The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18) Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16) The Classick Album(2/16) S&S Express E.P.(1/10) Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned. |
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