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Mike McGuire | 5 | 71.43% | |
Doc Holiday | 2 | 28.57% | |
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07-29-05, 11:07 AM | #1 |
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Mike McGuire vs Doc Holiday
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1 verse-8 bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-29-05 at 11:07 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
07-29-05, 11:08 AM | #2 | |
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Doc Holiday has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 11:08 AM.
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07-29-05, 11:17 AM | #3 |
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Mike you a loser a joke fareal,
don't hope to deal nigga smoke a kill, for da record, you a never blow ya skills is to wack, true fact nigga choke and chill. Homey you a pussy you a fagit at best, average and tempt, I murder you and laugh at the death, lyrically though, tell me is you hearin hoe, fuck you and ya crew fool i dare you to flow, no, don't do it you a lose it's a fact, the dude he can rap you a fool it's a rap, it's cruel get a bat nigga rep ya name, that set you claim nigga bets get game, cuz i'm the new spitter on the rv son, are we done or do i gotta carve me one, Mike, you a clown get down and don't talk, or i bet ya net worth that ya ass won't walk.
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07-29-05, 01:31 PM | #4 | |
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Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 01:31 PM.
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07-29-05, 02:51 PM | #5 | |
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IP: CE55 173A
Hes as weak as a 50 year old schlong and no point to guard
Hes really like 15 but uses Viagra just to act like he all hard Could he help himself out because he is a DOC It's ironic when I put dis doctor into total shock I bet he thinks he can put me away with such ease But Ill always be on you like you got genetal herpes Your flows stink as bad as your armpits You got more stink flow then halatosis
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07-29-05, 03:22 PM | #6 |
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IP: 5EC9 D7DA
that shit was garbage. step ya game up playboy. i know atlanta come harder than that.
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07-29-05, 03:32 PM | #7 |
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IP: 5EC9 D7DA
this one for the books homey. you lost.
check dog you shit is trash ya ass you can't beat me, please don't cheat delete or don't speak, nigga ya a cunt wit a premature bump, chump, step up and get effed up, wut, baby boy do not tempt me cuz you not ready, l ittle man you not heavy, in this rap shit niggas get gassed like getty, then Doc spit a flame and that ass confetti, Mike, you lil' tyke i'ma tonka toy, big guns big thugs all kind of noise, be fareal you don't really want no drama boy, you a breast feedin dick ridin mamma's boy, suck it up and take a L cause ya rhymes is weak, you only 15, good, thats time to peak, for now, ya shit suck no time to beef,] philly nigga go hard other niggas go bald. |
07-29-05, 05:17 PM | #8 | |
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Voted For: Mike McGuire
It was a struggle just to finish reading Doc Holiday . . .cause nothin graps me. . . not saying it was a bad drop but nothing sticked out. . . while Mike drop "Hes really like 15 but uses Viagra just to act like he all hard"-- alittle played buts till a better punch then the ones Holiday threw . . . "But Ill always be on you like you got genetal herpes"-- same with this one . . but both caught my attention . .so u won in punches . .also wordplay and structure and flow . . . ur closer was weak really to up on that cause you gotta leave a good impression . . . and holiday just kkep writing and ease on that cut throat ganster talk throw some metaphors and wordplay and work on ur structure and elevate . . . desent drop by both . .keep writing. . . and vote goes to McGuire
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07-29-05, 08:37 PM | #9 | |
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IP: CE55 173A
uppin.......we need some voters for this....thanks
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07-29-05, 08:49 PM | #10 |
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Voted For: Mike McGuire
I think this battle was kinda weak . . . both need to up their game . . No hate . . i just think you guys can do better . . . McGuire gets my vote for a btter personal :Could he help himself out because he is a DOC It's ironic when I put dis doctor into total shock: Mike also had better punches and easier to follow flow . . . i think some of your lines are played and i aint really feeling the closer . . like i said just keep writing guys
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FIX ur LENSES and get with FOCUS |
07-29-05, 09:49 PM | #11 |
-Not On My Level-
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This was feedback posted for Mike McGuire
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07-30-05, 11:58 AM | #12 |
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Voted For: Mike McGuire
Hes as weak as a 50 year old schlong and no point to guard Hes really like 15 but uses Viagra just to act like he all hard ....... hot............... 5/5 Could he help himself out because he is a DOC It's ironic when I put dis doctor into total shock ........ Ok ................. 3/5 I bet he thinks he can put me away with such ease But Ill always be on you like you got genetal herpes ......... Nice.................. 4/5 Your flows stink as bad as your armpits You got more stink flow then halatosis .......... Nice closer........ 4/5 OVERALL: 4/5 -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mike McGuire best line:Hes really like 15 but uses Viagra just to act like he all hard I feel that this battle was one- sided
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07-30-05, 12:41 PM | #13 | |
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Voted For: Doc Holiday
Man...did this battle suck ass flow-mike mcguire for having a shorter verse .......though the 2 of you suck ass at this punches-doc hiloday for having a longerverse. .............mike,next time have as much lines as oppenent creativity-neither,both of you sucked really bad ...............get new fresh concepts,with dope personals twised in it multi&vocab.-NOpe...none existant in this weak ass battle. Vote-Doc Holiday |
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07-30-05, 12:42 PM | #14 | ||
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07-30-05, 01:02 PM | #15 | |
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Voted For: Mike McGuire
Flow -Mike, was structured better, which made it flow better Punches - doc, some were played by both cats, but i felt that Mike had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder Personals - Mike, had alot more, and were alot better, Doc's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. Multies - Obviously Doc, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see. Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses overall vote is to: MIKE
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