upping this battle for some votes, i will return the favor

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Good shits from both.

Both came hard...gonna be close imo.

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ssame concept, its a played bar, ive seen similar concepts for alot of bars i see on this board.

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Whoo.. i think we have ourself here a bitter...

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Voted For: BoneCollector

BC

You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!

wooot woot. solid opener. Nice punch really set this up for a decent drop.. Nice imagery (no homo) eww

go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
^
ok bar, bit of a filler...

New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
^^

haha nice, bit of wordplay in there. good punch

So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
^
ok bar, another some what filler. Still nice but should of dropped somthing more hard hitting here.


That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
^^
haha nice, I liked this felt it was hard hitting and brought the level of your drop back.

And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
^
ok closure, could of come alot stronger though


SW

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat

^
nice opener.

So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
^
blah didnt rhyme, didnt even hit.

Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
^
reasonable punch. didnt feel the play on his name

Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
^
blah weak

So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
^
wtf? umm NO

Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
^
blah no punch and a crucial point inthe battle.

Vote bonecollecter

Voted For: Spoken Word

>You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
wtf? not a punch 2/10
>I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
meh, worded blahh, and weak 4/10
>New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
you're an old vet, thats it....self glore 0/10
>So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
not a punch 0/10
>That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
not a punch 0/10
>And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
yes he does exist, and he never said he was rap veteran 0/10

overall: 6/10 sorry to be so harsh, but your verse really sucked, elevate.

>I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
meh, alright 5/10
>So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
no, 1/10
>Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
played 2/10
>Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
not bad 4/10
>So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
nice wordplay, best punch right here 9/10
>Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
meh, decent 5/10

overall: 25/60....word, one sided match right here, all the way, spoken actually had punches, bone's was just some random dribble, with self-glore, nothing, at all......so spoken easily gets this.

v/spoken word

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Voted For: BoneCollector

Flow-Both
Metas-Bone
Vocab-Spoken
Multies-None
Punches-Bone
Structure-Both
Wordplay-Bone
Personals-Uhmmm
Creativity-None Really
Enjoyment-Bone
Complexity-Bone
Your Vote-Bone
Explanation- Punches win battles and Bone had more of those. He also had some nice metas and rhyming was on point. SPoken could have had some harder punches and he might have gotten my vote. Bome was a bit more complex with his internals.

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Alright.. This verse got a good a flow.. good punchlines..
I like how you use the "bones" out of his name too.. Good verse.. I didnt get to Bone's yet.. but im not complaining about yours..

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Voted For: BoneCollector

decent disses from both corners on this one...

spoken had some good punches nd wordplay but nothing was hitting too hard.. they were good but nothin id throw at a vet..

BC had some good punches aswell and i felt he came a little harder and really touched on spoken on a more personal level .. also had some pretty good wordplay and it had a nice flow to it..

decent battle.. both came hard

but BC came just that much harder

my vote - BoneCollector

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BC lets be honest. Your verse wasnt hot. The only reason that i only got 2 votes is because im unknown on this name. I guarantee if we do another battle same verses, ill win if i was on my flow intelligent name.


Thats the only thing i never liked about RV. The D/Ring because of 'vet' status.

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BC lets be honest. Your verse wasnt hot. The only reason that i only got 2 votes is because im unknown on this name. I guarantee if we do another battle same verses, ill win if i was on my flow intelligent name.


Thats the only thing i never liked about RV. The D/Ring because of 'vet' status.

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