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10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 08:10 PM

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Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 07:45 PM.

Kid Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 07:56 PM.

im droppin bombs you droppin smelly ass terds//
im spittin golden phrases while you spit dull and played ass words//
its death parade my rhymes are like a grenade and im da one holdin you still for the ride//
my method isnt to drop lines that evade but take you down even if i have to commit suicide//
its a mad mans verse vs a weak kids nursey rhyme mates//
its a sad plan and worse then that tweaked shit that you spit against aitz//
im spit flames so quit mayne i could you anyday bitch you ain no competion//
your skillz out ov this world because they were rejected by the planet//
im beatin and defeatin you just efecting poetic rhymes on some shit like hamlet//
you decomposed by my rap yo shit is worse then wack but i suppose its good you on ain on yo own track//

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Child Of Chaos

Ight Check it.....
Eye's Scorn In Rhyming Wars,Snap Your Wrists So K Timing's Poor
Twist Ya Spinal Cord,Punch Ya Teeth Through Ya Cortex .........
.................................................. .........So Ya Mind is Torn
This Is Not A Passive Contest But I'll Make Ya Grasp The Concept
Smashing Ya Face Through Tha Monitor To Create A Graphic Onset
Then Pounce This Fag When I Cut Your Joints in Two
Stick My Fingers Through Your Eyes To Give You My Point Of View
I'll Sink ur Clout U Can Scream And Shout Until ur Ink Runs Out
And Place ur 'Brain Outside ur Skull' So u Can 'Think This Out
Its "HARD Ta SCHOOL Me" Kid..This "Ox Tryna Wonk Me
This Fag Only Gets To "Hits Ass" In Stables..Boxin With Donkeys
He Prolly Thinks His Drop Versed Well,but Blaze Dispurse Hell
I'ma Be the reason he's hooked on drugs cuz i'm handin............
.................................................. ......this kid his First L

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Voted For: Young Blaze

sorry kid chaos not this time, ur rhymes were played and ur structure was off....no hate to u....young blaze your punches and structure was by far better....and ur multis is wat made this the win nice job...and please rtf on my o/m Masked Disguise

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Child Of Chaos

Voted For: Young Blaze

im droppin bombs you droppin smelly ass terds//
chaos...wtf?
its death parade my rhymes are like a grenade and im da one holdin you still for the ride//
my method isnt to drop lines that evade but take you down even if i have to commit suicide//
chaos....gettin better
its a mad mans verse vs a weak kids nursey rhyme mates//
its a sad plan and worse then that tweaked shit that you spit against aitz//
im in ur verse...lmao
im beatin and defeatin you just efecting poetic rhymes on some shit like hamlet//
you decomposed by my rap yo shit is worse then wack but i suppose its good you on ain on yo own track//
decent...

now...
Eye's Scorn In Rhyming Wars,Snap Your Wrists So K Timing's Poor
Twist Ya Spinal Cord,Punch Ya Teeth Through Ya Cortex .........
.................................................. .........So Ya Mind is Torn......................................good punch.......................wtf is up with all the dots?...........

dude why do u use dots? it dont make ur structure look any better..
structure goes to: kid
punchlines to : blaze
wordplay goes to : blaze
enjoiment to :kid

v/blaze

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Voted For: Young Blaze

kid
by the bars u highlighted in my open mic, i could tell u hade the same eye for words i did... becuase those were a couple of my favrorite bars in the shit but i didn't think anyone else would care for them. anyway, ur comments were exactly the kind of thing i want to here about my work...
so i owed ur verse the same scrutiny...
ur first first bar woulda been crazy wit some wordplay on "golden phrases"...cant think of one now, but u get the idea. suicide lines shows u got sick ideas. but u just fell short on impact, it dont even gotta be a punch to get my attention, but ur verse was full of good bars gone wrong, but i liked it... u gonna be killin niggas once u get the delivery together...ima be watchin u... join a league cuz getin ur ass whiped is a great motivater...


young
ur shit was on point kid, no abundance of vocab but instead i saw a well of word play. funny as hell 2nd bar started it for me.3rd bar kinda played(dont act like it aint true!)but didnt fuck up the verse. 4th bar was surprisingly hurtfull, hot idea...5th bar was fuck in funny, i dont care who u are, thats funny. first line of the closer was hot but last line was played(u know it!) but i was feelin it the first time i heard it and im still feelin it now...


young blaze gets the vote..... but watch out for kid chaos...

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ack...im goin down hill quick lol

votes still uppin ppl

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Child Of Chaos

UUuUuuuuuuuuuuuppppppinnnn........................ ..

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UPPPppppiiinnnn................................... .........

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Damn man hella one sided...

but my vote goes to YB


YB: I loved tha multi's man it was'nt one thing wrong wit your verse...pluis i enjoyed reading it....but tha only thing i can say is well cop some more personals man thats it you know.

best line:
Its "HARD Ta SCHOOL Me" Kid..This "Ox Tryna Wonk Me
This Fag Only Gets To "Hits Ass" In Stables..Boxin With Donkeys

^^funny shit man


Kid: elevate man nice struture and all but your punches were'nt really hard hitting at all..i mean come one you gotta come harder kid

V/Yb


rtf in my sig or this will be removed.(seriously)lol

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