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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Pair-A-Docks | 2 | 28.57% | |
nonchalant | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-14-05, 07:43 PM | #16 | |
GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
return the favor since i voted on yas battle ya can vote on my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199762 |
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07-14-05, 08:08 PM | #17 |
Flyweight
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IP: BBBD 91AB
uppin I will get to that battle later on ok? ^^^^
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07-14-05, 08:35 PM | #18 |
New to RV
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IP: C7FD 2E92
uppin' for votes...
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07-15-05, 12:20 AM | #19 |
New to RV
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IP: C7FD 2E92
uppin' for votes...
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07-19-05, 07:09 PM | #20 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: 5504 D94E
Voted For: nonchalant
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108 both of u return the favor or vote will be dqed nonchalant got my vote cause he came harder with his punches. pair-a-docks u hot man but your punches were not hittin as hard no hate at all man u did your thing aight well thats my vote return the honest favor or it will be dqed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108
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07-24-05, 12:02 PM | #21 |
New to RV
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IP: C7FD 2E92
uppin for votes
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07-24-05, 12:20 PM | #22 |
New to RV
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This was feedback posted for Pair-A-Docks
IP: 2133 D61F
wit that in mind then it's nothin really missin' to say
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07-24-05, 12:39 PM | #23 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: C3C2 9AA5
yo i asked yall to returnthe favor man so heres a link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200482
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07-26-05, 05:00 PM | #24 |
New to RV
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IP: C7FD 2E92
uppppinnnnnnnnnnnn
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07-30-05, 02:20 PM | #25 |
New to RV
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IP: C7FD 2E92
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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08-07-05, 07:30 PM | #26 |
New to RV
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IP: E9A2 E60A
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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08-07-05, 09:09 PM | #27 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: B1B6 F0FB
Voted For: nonchalant
Kid....how do you think you gonna win writing bad rap and stuff like that... You look FOOLISH....got Em saying, "I ain't never seen an ASS like that"... ^^^weak and basic......2/10 Kid you're all clammed up...you need to at least try to get out ya shell... I would say that you might win...but kid there I really doubt you will... ^^^shell/will...doesn't rhyme...weak punch...2/10 You think that you can rap kid.....well guess what...I don't believe you... Cause honestly...your lines are as stupid...as a line for a movie preview... ^^HuH?....weak.....2/10 You can't free-style....cept maybe wit ya clothes from the Goodwill... Dogg your punches couldn't hit me.....even if I just stood still... ^^That punches can't hit/stand still is played..2/10 Don't try to throw blows my way kid.....cause ya disses I can't feel... How ya think you'll win.......when you can't elevate past an ant hill! ^^feel/hill...doesn't rhyme...weak punch again!..2/10 Man...all your punches were weak.I see you got the structure....but aside from that...there was nothing.A lot of your rhymes didn't rhyme.Make every line rhyme.Then...your punches...they were weak.You were just stating stuff.Get some wordplay and metas and such. Check it..i will pulverize this kid..turn his flesh into ashes He's..runnin' out of 'shine' like a 'light bulb' that 'flashes' ^^^basic and played.....2/10 When he's playin 'basketball'..that's the only time he's 'runnin for the block'(reppin) It's obvious he likes thing in 'twos'..so let's give pair-a-docks a pair-of-cocks ^^OMG....uncreative as fuck....1/10 It's 'funny' how he's confident battlin' me..he's a fuckin' 'joke' Only time he fuckin' looks 'big' is if he put on two fluffy 'coats' ^^Basic....2/10 I'm new to RV..but the new kid will still eat ya Only way he's 'toppin' me if he was 'pepperoni' and i was the 'pizza ^^meh...maybe yo best line..though still weak..4/10' To beat me is impossible...like bein' a Pussy-AndDick(pair-a-docks) Put this dude on a 'strawberry'..cuz i 'creamed' him and gave his ass a 'whip' ^^^PLAYed....2/10 HAd too many played lines.Flow and structure was good.Just get some more creative shit.You seemed to be saying things just because they rhyme...like that pair a docks/pair a cocks line.The best line is this whole battle was probably the pizza/toppin one.SO ya got my vote for better punches and actually rhyming in every line. Vote-NonChalant RTF PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256 ^^^c'mon...i gave both of you feedback to help you improve |
08-21-05, 01:23 AM | #28 |
New to RV
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IP: 1A55 2FC7
upppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn
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08-24-05, 02:16 AM | #29 |
HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
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IP: 1D2D 3134
Voted For: nonchalant
very nice verse, came harder, musta wanted it more....but overall had some good flow to it also.. V/Nonchalant
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