This was very nice, a lot of good metaphors, Imagery wasn't evident on this piece...but it wasn't needed...and i don't really see how you could have used it. This piece was fairly close to flawless, the flaws that It has I can't put my finger on...it's something about that way I'm reading it...maybe thats just me though..over all..very nice pice....I'm impressed...stay up

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