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08-20-05, 04:21 AM
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Her
IP: D25C B392
Her  The first time I met you, I felt touched inside. Your smile, so gorgeous gurl, Inspired from your pride. To know your mine, Someone I can talk to when down. But I can’t hold back, My feelings make me frown. This question I have is very known, But with heart we can shine. If we we’re to hold each other, Would that be fine? So what I’m saying is, That I want us together. At least could we try it?, And maybe be connected forever. Cameo All I want is you, Nothing or not even anyone else.
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08-20-05, 04:45 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
first of all let me say damn they fine..let me talk to one of them
ok as for ur poem..it was alright..kinda basic..a little corny..its cool though..she'll probly like it. |
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08-20-05, 02:37 PM
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IP: D25C B392
what am i suppose to say i love her?
thats just retarded. and the one on the left is cameo.
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08-20-05, 04:55 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: D477 E710
If ONLY she was a Lesbian
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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08-20-05, 10:07 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
naw man im saying she'll like it so dont worry about it..most girls are suckers for poems..well from my experience.
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08-21-05, 02:00 AM
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New to RV
![[Dot.Effextz]'s Avatar](images/avatars/vidaguerra4.jpg)
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IP: CC3C 0706
well im new to here but i kno how to give feed so yea.....
Well when i first read this i dident see the little line that seperates the post and your signature so i saw Fuck your intellegence so i thought *damn he fucked up* lol BUT ANYWAY.....This piece was good.. nice way to tell her how u really feel......vocab was simple but in this case simple is good.....your imagrey (cant judge it cuz you gave a pic) all around this piece will get the job done.....i liked it cuz i can realate so yea good ish..... be safe Uno |
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