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08-21-05, 03:27 AM | #1 | |||||||
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No Matter How Long (Deep !!! )
IP: D312 75FD
whats up i been absent for a lil bit due to alot of personal problems this is a song i decided to record due to me and my girl breakin up a while back and i've missed her since and i had to get this off my chest......
www.bandspace.com/traidmarx 1st song |
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08-21-05, 03:35 AM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: D312 75FD
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08-21-05, 12:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: D312 75FD
come on people drop a fuckin reply...
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08-21-05, 12:49 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 1ADC A69C
dat beat had potential...but who ever produced it didn't get the most out of it...it cudda be KNOCKIN 4 real
ur flow and delivery work for it however, ur Hook sounds contrived... i think hookd shud be simple...like one main idea and repeat over and over almost like a chant...jus my opinion pretty good track tho 1 |
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08-21-05, 02:20 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
wow, very, very, very impressive. this is the kind of track i like. absolutely luvin the beat, is that urs or sum1 elses, if so wot beat is it???? anywayz yer as tha Q sed your flow's definetely on point for this, and you ride the beat really well.
decent track right there. 9.5/10
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08-21-05, 06:43 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: D312 75FD
thanks for checkin out....
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08-21-05, 08:56 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: D3B0 D43B
love da fuckin beat...for REAL thaz my kinda style of beat yo hook it up? were u get it from? kuzz that shitz hot
yo ur flow is tite...u take a hell lot of breathz during the track which fuckz up ya flow big time and takes up time when u rhyme...the feeling is dere u have emotion behined ya wordz and thaz some real shit yo imma harsh person so imma be even more Real u shoulda had someone help u on this...not saying u needed a collab but someone to do ur chorus kuzz ur deep breath u took during the hook is heard more then ur verse so yea u shoulda had someone else do ur hook...tha chorus is hot tho but ur voice is kinda dry but eh hot enuff honestly i like that track seriously id prolly bump it all day so keep up da good work and learn how to control ur breathing k?
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08-22-05, 03:03 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
yea i wish i coulda got someone to sing on it or at least do back up vocals
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08-22-05, 11:57 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin...........
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08-25-05, 06:27 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin for more feed
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08-28-05, 08:44 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: D312 75FD
uppin this shit...
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