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Natural killa 0 0%
King Solo 5 100.00%
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Old 08-23-05, 08:38 AM   #31
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Old 08-23-05, 10:21 AM   #32
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Voted For: King Solo

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
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It was aight, pretty basic but it hit...sort of lol 6/10

Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
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Nah, wasnt feelin it much, still it was a okay bar, 6/10 again

Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
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Nice nameplay, straight punch....7.5/10

And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
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Good hit, feelin the playin off your own structure an using it against him, somthin new right there, 8/10


I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
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Kind of complex, good flow too it an wordplay 8.5/10

See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below
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LOL Kind of witty, again never seen the concept before, good hit 7.5/10

Nice verse not much i can fault besides ya opening few bars, rest was flawless, decent drop solo.


70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
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Opening line using the ''dickrider'' thing is played, kinda like the pun in the second line i was like ''heh, thats aight''...lol, 6/10

I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
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opening line seemed corny too me, didnt really understand the second line either, weak bar anyway 4.5/10

nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
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good wordplay, really feelin this bar 8/10

come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
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opening line was good, thought you was gonna drop a bomb on him in the second, but it dissapointed me 5/10

his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
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good try, just worded horribly 5.5/10

I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
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Good creativity, but again...could of been worded alot better than it was 6.5/10

Ya verse was aight, kid...you just lack better wording of your punches, ya ideas are good, but you gotta know how too term them creative ideas into better punchlines

Overall solo had the more consistancy an a more complex feel too his verse so he gets my vote

vote=solo.....yeah.
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Old 08-23-05, 10:27 AM   #33
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yo i would had to give this shit to king solo...his verse was better...i liked the flow and structure...rtf wen i start battlin
 
Old 08-23-05, 03:35 PM   #34
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nah....I got mad beef with TG n UNF..yet they go votin in my battle

but you won now..me n khaoz ain't got no beef.

so congrads on a win
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Old 08-24-05, 02:32 AM   #35
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