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Check in by: 08-24-05 at 03:43 PM

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REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 03:16 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 03:21 PM.

Young Blaze...Fa real...lol!

aight check it...

I'm automatic when it's battle that I leave you a slave...
Red tha OLD EXSTINGUISHER, easily I'll put away a YOUNG BLAZE...
I saw ya interest is killin mc's, you made a mistake in ya title...
cauz I peeped ya flow, ya lines kill you every time wit that flow thas suicidal...
I'm here ta piss ya off, I'm RedZone, dawg I'll get cha BODY SPRAYED...
I'll piss in ya face, while bullets engrave in ya waves or unloosen braids...
they call me KING where I'm from, you probably a FIEND where you from...
I could easily steal ya block, permanently leave you neva seen where you from...
kidnap ya bitch , rape tha slut and make tha cum skeet out on ya girl...
mah rhymes must not exist if ya words are "Out of this world"...
I'm poison so mah verbal venom is a hazard ta you...
if your Jerzy's Finest, I bet tha whole state is embarrassed by you...

Ight Check It About to Be a MUrda In Here.......

This Kids ZONES All Fucked Wit the Ak'S So Now Everythin's Red
plus Hes Kno for Givin Dome...Like a tuff constrution worker
.................................................. ..........he gives Hard Head
This Guy Is Fucked Only Beats Ass When He Lies On Butts
High Off Dust Red Couldn’t Pack A House If He Was A Ryder Truck
I'll throw Slugz at Red,Dissolve his chest turn his lungs to Salt
Battlin Blaze This bitch better learn to 'roll wit the punches'
……………………………...........like Mike Tyson doin Sum-mer-saults
So U gettin A win Aint Gonna Happen Dont Hold Yah Breath
This Like Playin Sports wit the GRim Reaper U Got Picked For Death
Im Callin Ill-Legal Play Ref Threw A Red FLag At Yah Zone
AN like Listen to Death Metal In yah Cd player.............
............................i Got The Chrome To Kill Yah headPhones
When I Blow My Fuse I'ma Make u Fold N Bruise Wit ColdAbuse
Ya Like Cheap Budget Moviez...Cuz u'll Never Roll Wit Cruise(Crews)
^^^
Crew Less Fuck.......

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Voted For: Young Blaze

this was an aiight battle

young blaze:

punches were aiight.,...good structure.....same way as i do it sometimes...some shit was stretched but overall good structure....personals....a few were there...i give it about 7/10...punches 7/10 ......your flow was aiight,...overall i give you about 7.2/10

red: your shit was way too basic...i didnt like nothin u sed...yoiu had a few punches here and there...it was aiight...ur structure was ok...ur flow was there...but u lacked personals and punches..overall i give u 6./10

vote...young

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Voted For: Young Blaze

iight i aint trynna suck add when i say blaze got this fo sho....cos he came up with harder punches and his structure was gd together with the flow...
This Kids ZONES All Fucked Wit the Ak'S So Now Everythin's Red
plus Hes Kno for Givin Dome...Like a tuff constrution worker
.................................................. ..........he gives Hard Head

^^ that was a very decent opner..had gd wodplay and hit harder than ur opponent's

and even thought your whole verse was entertainin and filled with gd personals,your closer was kinna weak but overall ur verse was much more on track...gd job


RED...all u did was talk about urself...in other words you were selfglorifyin...which took u off track and ur punches didnt hit hard enuff to deal with blaze...opner was weak and some likes like


cauz I peeped ya flow, ya lines kill you every time wit that flow thas suicidal...

^^ that was kinna aimless and slightly senseless...no hate but it was...

BUT to compliment you,u had a decent closer and that is



I'm poison so mah verbal venom is a hazard ta you...
if your Jerzy's Finest, I bet tha whole state is embarrassed by you...

^^ nice personal...and w/p

but u still didnt keep it hittin...no much entertainin wordplay..xcept one...so with this my vote goes to blaze for a much more consistent verse which,to me,was really on track hittin harder and harder...

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Young Blaze

This Kids ZONES All Fucked Wit the Ak'S So Now Everythin's Red
plus Hes Kno for Givin Dome...Like a tuff constrution worker
.................................................. ..........he gives Hard Head
^nice closer, had dope wordplay formed into punch......8/10

This Guy Is Fucked Only Beats Ass When He Lies On Butts
High Off Dust Red Couldn’t Pack A House If He Was A Ryder Truck
^both hardhitting punches and good wordplay.............7/10

I'll throw Slugz at Red,Dissolve his chest turn his lungs to Salt
Battlin Blaze This bitch better learn to 'roll wit the punches'
……………………………...........like Mike Tyson doin Sum-mer-saults
^first line is bit bleh but second is hot, consistent with wordplay........7/10

So U gettin A win Aint Gonna Happen Dont Hold Yah Breath
This Like Playin Sports wit the GRim Reaper U Got Picked For Death
^nice wordplay again in second line, first good built-up.....7/10

Im Callin Ill-Legal Play Ref Threw A Red FLag At Yah Zone
AN like Listen to Death Metal In yah Cd player.............
............................i Got The Chrome To Kill Yah headPhones
^not really feelin the punch in this one, first line was funny though.......6/10

When I Blow My Fuse I'ma Make u Fold N Bruise Wit ColdAbuse
Ya Like Cheap Budget Moviez...Cuz u'll Never Roll Wit Cruise(Crews)
^hot personal in second line, good built-up, finished em off nicely.......8/10

Total: 43/60 = 72%

REDZONE

I'm automatic when it's battle that I leave you a slave...
Red tha OLD EXSTINGUISHER, easily I'll put away a YOUNG BLAZE...
^good wordplay, bit self-glorifying in beginning maybe....6/10

I saw ya interest is killin mc's, you made a mistake in ya title...
cauz I peeped ya flow, ya lines kill you every time wit that flow thas suicidal...
^haha, nice punch with a personal touch, good bar.......8/10

I'm here ta piss ya off, I'm RedZone, dawg I'll get cha BODY SPRAYED...
I'll piss in ya face, while bullets engrave in ya waves or unloosen braids...
^uhm no real punch in fact, just self-glorifying.........4/10

they call me KING where I'm from, you probably a FIEND where you from...
I could easily steal ya block, permanently leave you neva seen where you from...
^uhm rhyming with same word is lame, decent bar I guess......5/10

kidnap ya bitch , rape tha slut and make tha cum skeet out on ya girl...
mah rhymes must not exist if ya words are "Out of this world"...
^hehe funny bar right here....6/10

I'm poison so mah verbal venom is a hazard ta you...
if your Jerzy's Finest, I bet tha whole state is embarrassed by you...
^lmao at the last line.....7/10

Total: 36/60 = 60%

Vote goes to Young Blaze for more complexity in his punches and such, good flow as well. REDZONE had solid battle verse but could've had more consistency in the punches.

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Voted For: Young Blaze

aight, young blaze gets this

wanna know why.......better punches, more consistency with punches, they were more creative and had greater effectiveness due to everything i've stated above.......but, it wasn't the best i've seen, some lines were a lil stretched......word, work on wording

v/young blaze

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