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08-22-05, 12:21 PM
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fraud vs New Edition
IP: 22E5 DE19
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08-22-05, 12:27 PM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
New Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 12:27 PM.
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08-22-05, 12:29 PM
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IP: C295 AD2A
fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 12:29 PM.
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08-22-05, 12:33 PM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
Playa thinks his "fat" spitter, ou.............eat me like piece of cake,
just eat,cauze "NEW" cake doesnt choke,it makes ur insides brake. And fuck that solo told me to take new teacher....i dont, Im not like u fraud, my only homework is get beat ya. But you are with stupid........... so u cant type ur words, cauze bitch doesnt duck in "net" he looks competitors. explation check his call out and his sig....nothing else needed
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08-22-05, 12:36 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C295 AD2A
U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss..
You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss.. My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores' Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!! U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS, Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS You're Done |
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08-22-05, 12:38 PM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
ok......lol...........gd job man...no hate...........can we now get some votes.............
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08-22-05, 12:46 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Voted For: fraud
IP: U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss.. You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss.. could have been better but still a very funny line.. i really liked it My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores' Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!! you really need to work on ur structure these lines are really stretch but the content was hard hitting.......... but work on keeping line balance helps make lines easier to read U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS, Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS desent closer.........could have been better.......but sums everything up pretty well.....pretty good drop work on the stuff i mentioned and u'll be even better....keep writing and good luck to both............
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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08-22-05, 07:05 PM
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IP: C24F C8EB
Voted For: fraud
fraud U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss.. You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss.. 3.. Barely decent.. My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores' Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!! 1.. This was just retarded.. U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS, Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS 3.. Barely decent again.. Overall - 7 New Edition Playa thinks his "fat" spitter, ou.............eat me like piece of cake, just eat,cauze "NEW" cake doesnt choke,it makes ur insides brake. 0.. This was just a statement.. And fuck that solo told me to take new teacher....i dont, Im not like u fraud, my only homework is get beat ya. 2.. Why the shit did you add "i dont" after teacher. That totally bombed the rhyme scheme in this line.. However, the concept had potential.. it just didn't work out right.. But you are with stupid........... so u cant type ur words, cauze bitch doesnt duck in "net" he looks competitors. 2.. Concept had potential.. but you bombed it with your wording.. Overall - 4 Vote - Fraud |
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08-23-05, 01:34 AM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
thx for feed................still uppin...................
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08-23-05, 01:43 AM
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RV aint Dead
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This was feedback posted for New Edition
IP: 3103 2A89
pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssss
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08-24-05, 02:32 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C295 AD2A
up up up up up up up and away she should blow i guess
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08-25-05, 02:30 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: C295 AD2A
thx for feed................still uppin...................
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08-26-05, 01:42 PM
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IP: 22E5 DE19
...............uppin.............................. ..
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08-27-05, 11:56 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 9145 1B7B
...............uppin.............................. ..
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08-28-05, 12:11 AM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Voted For: fraud
U Winnin' Battles? Just A 'Matter Of Interaction' - Nothin SHORT-OF-PHYSICS, Damn U Still Here? I'll Just Leave Your Career Here Short-Lived Like ABORTED-MIDGETS ^^^ ANY MIGET LINES ARE PLAYED TO HELL U Dont Want Beef Or You'll Trigger My Inc, So Obay Your Boss.. You Aint Dieting On Mc's So Like Fat People Weight, Ur Expecting A Loss.. ^^ GOOD PUNCH WITH WORDPLAY NOT WORDED TO WELL BUT IT HIT My Punches Like 'The-Art-Of-War, Stabing You With Sharp Objects From 'Hardware-Stores' Lemme Break This 'PIMP' Like Ya Got 'Larger-Pores'..' Cumming' To Get a 'Beat'in', I've Seen 'SMARTER WHORES'!! ^^ YOUR LINES ARE STRETCH TO HELL, U SHOULDA JUST KEPT THE BREAK PIMP WITH LARGE PORES LINE AND CUT OUT THE REST... CUZ THAT WAS A DECENT PUNCH WITH WORDPLAY THE REST SUCKED AND STRECHED THE LINE .. ALL AND ALL U HAT DOME DECEN'T PUNCHES BUT SOME PLAYED SHIT AND YOUR BARS ARE TOO STRECHED .. ne .. ALL YOUR LINES SUCKED BUT.. Playa thinks his "fat" spitter, ou.............eat me like piece of cake, just eat,cauze "NEW" cake doesnt choke,it makes ur insides brake. ^^ IF U SAID... try eatin me like im a peice of cake faggot i'll make your stomach break more than cars in traffic ^^ use metafors and get creative with it with wordplay and shit ... PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR ON MY BATTLE... LINK IN MY SIG... AGIANST MR. LYRICIST
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