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Jeezy | 0 | 0% | |
Deranged2 | 5 | 100.00% | |
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08-27-05, 11:28 PM | #1 |
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Deranged vs Jeezy
IP: C777 4494
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-30-05 at 11:28 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
08-27-05, 11:30 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
Jeezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-05 11:30 PM.
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08-28-05, 12:36 AM | #3 |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
Ima be real witcha dogg, cuz this battle isnt my first time..
ill even piss in ur mouth and u still wouldnt spit a hot line..* Like T.I. "im a king" and ur just a pawn, u cant 'check' me 'mate'.. and like fags wearin blue claimin bloods, bro i consider u fake.. If u got guns then point em away cuz u dont wanna hurt yourself.. Only one u touched was that super soaker u got when u turned twelve.. ur verses are like midgets..they wont even stick out if you held down and 'SHIFT IT'..** I can ask santa to give u raps for christmas and u still wouldnt be 'lyrically gifted'.. u probably have like 10 accounts banned..so you decided to hide behind an alias.. cuz u prefer to 'bite' the cock no matter what the 'DAILY' is..*** explainations for the slow ones: *-piss is hot.. **- holding shift and typing his verse ***-DAILY=daily special |
08-28-05, 01:51 AM | #4 | |
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IP: C777 4494
Deranged has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:51 AM.
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08-28-05, 12:09 PM | #5 |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
Wow seriously..from now on im setting the battles getting tired of herbs using all 3 days to post and wasting time.
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08-28-05, 07:32 PM | #6 | |
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IP: F968 7416
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^^he said that in this thread.. this battle's a sure win..I'ma smack him so his aunti'll feel the thump and wtf..why you in a rush to lose?..when ur' panties in a clump* ur own mother hates you twice..and she's the one who placed u in strife and while you claim I'm wasting time... ......bitch........YOUR WASTING LIFE!** must think you pretty now..but after this u'll be boasting a few cuts callin me a herb but you the one gettin roasted like peanuts*** u better start hualin ass cuz ur fallin flat..down in the subject Cuz Jeezy.. I ain't DMX..but I'ma still clown you in public u ain't rising...you epotimizing..full of whackness in the package it seems tired a herbs?....how?..when your the wearin them in your genes (genes)*** ***-all the bars with the stars are based of the quote |
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08-28-05, 07:34 PM | #7 | |
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IP: F968 7416
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^^for boasting this kinda talk..I expected you to be dope |
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08-28-05, 08:13 PM | #8 |
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IP: 72AA 464B
Voted For: Jeezy
Deranged this battle's a sure win..I'ma smack him so his aunti'll feel the thump and wtf..why you in a rush to lose?..when ur' panties in a clump* No played out.. ur own mother hates you twice..and she's the one who placed u in strife and while you claim I'm wasting time... ......bitch........YOUR WASTING LIFE!** ok... seemed a little forced. How can she hate twice? must think you pretty now..but after this u'll be boasting a few cuts callin me a herb but you the one gettin roasted like peanuts*** ok u better start hualin ass cuz ur fallin flat..down in the subject Cuz Jeezy.. I ain't DMX..but I'ma still clown you in public No wack! u ain't rising...you epotimizing..full of whackness in the package it seems tired a herbs?....how?..when your the wearin them in your genes (genes)*** ok punch poor closure your lines were played an forced. You had some okay punches but your multis were forced.. You had a poor strucutre though. Nice flow. All i can say is elevate on harder punches personals an forcing lines. Jeezy Ima be real witcha dogg, cuz this battle isnt my first time.. ill even piss in ur mouth and u still wouldnt spit a hot line..* Funny shit.. nice punch Like T.I. "im a king" and ur just a pawn, u cant 'check' me 'mate'.. and like fags wearin blue claimin bloods, bro i consider u fake.. GOOD 10/10 If u got guns then point em away cuz u dont wanna hurt yourself.. Only one u touched was that super soaker u got when u turned twelve.. No played ur verses are like midgets..they wont even stick out if you held down and 'SHIFT IT'..** I can ask santa to give u raps for christmas and u still wouldnt be 'lyrically gifted'.. Good u probably have like 10 accounts banned..so you decided to hide behind an alias.. cuz u prefer to 'bite' the cock no matter what the 'DAILY' is..*** ok closure could of done better You had a nice verse. Hard funny punches. Nice alias personals. Good wordplay an strucutre with the flow BreakDown Punches- Jezzy personals-Jeezy flow-Tie Strucutre- Jeezy complexity- Jezzy creativity- Jezzy wordplay-Jezzy Multis- Jezzy ( De had some but i felt they were forced. A mom cant hate twice?? Make sense v/ Jezzy for fuunier harder hitting punches an personals with wordplay. no hate. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-28-05, 08:35 PM | #9 |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
Good call bro, uppin this bitch
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08-28-05, 08:37 PM | #10 |
Still Making Webs....
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This was feedback posted for Jeezy
IP: A31D B4E6
good battle not voting just looking around.........
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08-28-05, 09:25 PM | #11 |
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IP: F968 7416
uppin for some real votes
not some hate votes.. |
08-28-05, 09:58 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
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If you consider all votes against u to be hate votes...expect 4 more coming |
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08-28-05, 10:19 PM | #13 | |
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IP: B885 C295
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Lmao@you thinking your verse was nice and wasn't played |
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08-28-05, 11:15 PM | #14 |
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IP: 1272 CBE0
w/e u say..i have no time to argue with you. lets just let the votes decide nawmsayin
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08-28-05, 11:19 PM | #15 |
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IP: B885 C295
yea........werd......gotta wait for some votes -_-
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