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Old 08-25-05, 02:37 PM   #1
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what up recorded this last night in a couple hours let me know what ya think.......



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Old 08-25-05, 02:38 PM   #2
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Old 08-25-05, 04:09 PM   #3
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aiight peepin'....

Beat ill yo. Like the flow, shit's tight. Good lyrics too. Quality could be better, but still sound coo. Like the hook yo, likin' it. nice shit to bop your head too. Front page news shit. word @ that. flow still keepin' it good. good multi's. Emotion pretty coo, could upp it a lil, but it was still nice tho yo.

OVerall, track was pretty nice, liked it. I could bump this shit. loved the beat too. Jus up emotion a lil. but other than that, shit was pretty dope. keep it up 9/10....
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Old 08-25-05, 05:54 PM   #4
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uppin... thanks for the feed
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Old 08-25-05, 05:57 PM   #5
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yea...can hear ur breathing...now, when I rap, u can hear my breathing...but it sounds like ur gasping in 1 or 2 spots, particularly in the hook


beat is nice

flow is pretty decent

delivery is acceptable...cuz be better


not a bad track


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Old 08-25-05, 06:24 PM   #6
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im fat... breathing aint my strong point
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Old 08-26-05, 05:39 PM   #7
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im fat... breathing aint my strong point



Rofl...Atleast he doesnt make up weak excuses
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Old 08-28-05, 08:43 PM   #8
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